Dear lilysily10,
I hate geography as well, good thing we're on the same page, haha. :P
Wow, cliffhanger much?
This is cruel. Don't leave it at that! Continue it!
It's really nice, we're confused, but he's confused too... so we're all together in this! Your quality is good, I don't see many punctuation/grammar issues... It's all good!
Please continue it, it's pretty interesting!
~Julian
Date: 24 June 2014
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