NICE!
It's perfect, crisp and clean-cut punctuation, it's nicely paced and I really like it.
Please keep writing!
I don't have much to say... which is a good thing! It's going well... It has potential!
Pleaseeeee keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
~Julian
Date: 24 June 2014
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