Love Is Forever

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NICE!

It's perfect, crisp and clean-cut punctuation, it's nicely paced and I really like it.

Please keep writing!

I don't have much to say... which is a good thing! It's going well... It has potential!

Pleaseeeee keep writing!!!!!!!!!!

~Julian

Date: 24 June 2014

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