BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II

A House But Not A Home

ARGH DON'T DELETE THE STORY IT'S BEAUTIFUL!

:'(

Fantastic spacing, clean-cut punctuation, plot makes sense, characters make sense, nice descriptions... but a writer's gotta do what a writer's gotta do.

Good luck on your next book... This was a great read while it lasted. :'(

xox,

Julian

Date: 24 June 2014