SORRY FOR THE 2 YEAR DELAY :(((
I LOVE IT. It's catchy, and yes, the latin is correct (I speak Italian and understand like 80% of latin) and the description is fabulous. I'm not going soft or fluffy on you. This story has POTENTIAL.
DIVINE descriptions (no pun intended) (okay maybe a little), and MAGNIFICENT PUNCTUATION.
Please continue this story!
* adds to library *
xox,
Julian
Date: 24 June 2014
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