Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

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Debbie Hopkins By DebbieHopkins Updated Feb 04, 2017

"I love you." Rafe interrupted softly, gazing into my eyes.  "I love you for singing with me. I love you for overcoming your fear. I love you for not leaving the beach when it was freezing, for listening, for talking, for fighting, for trying, for giving me your all, for trusting me."
	"I love you for being honest with me." I said.
	"I'm hearing love. Are you hearing love?"
	I couldn't say anything.
	"Marry me, Aubrey." My eyes snapped up to his. "I'm serious. Marry me."
	I turned, ready to leave, wanting to leave, hating his trump card. A last ditch effort to hang on to something that needed to be done away with. 
	"We don't work, Rafe."
	"You're not a little girl." He whispered gently. "You aren't naive enough to believe that love doesn't claim baggage. We all have baggage. We come with it part and parcel, things we carry along, things we downsize and improve on. Things we change and exchange. Come on, Aubrey. We were made for each other. You can feel it. I can feel it."

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SantosPhillipCarlo SantosPhillipCarlo Jun 21, 2017
Really appreciate you putting this out here beforehand and it definitely makes for some interesting stuff going forward.
BeesFavKay BeesFavKay Nov 03, 2017
I try to avoid such people. They think they are smart. 😏😏
 #Wallflower This is really sad. This seems like a great way for you to introduce your character. And so far, the story is really great!
BeesFavKay BeesFavKay Nov 03, 2017
Giving them false hopes.... That's bad.
                              Serious complications...really ready bad. It's saddening.
PromiseToyo PromiseToyo Feb 02
 #wallflower
                              
                              Honestly this one of the few really great writings I've seen so far on wattpad... I'm happy I came across this. The character build without the readers knowing the character's was executed amazingly, love it
 #Wallflower
                              
                              I loved the start!
                              It was intriguing, kept me on my toes, and made me get extremely excited for reading it further. You have written it beautifully, giving the right length for the chapter, and made it very light yet full of information. Very elegant presentation!