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Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

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Debbie Hopkins By DebbieHopkins Updated Feb 04

"I love you." Rafe interrupted softly, gazing into my eyes.  "I love you for singing with me. I love you for overcoming your fear. I love you for not leaving the beach when it was freezing, for listening, for talking, for fighting, for trying, for giving me your all, for trusting me."
	"I love you for being honest with me." I said.
	"I'm hearing love. Are you hearing love?"
	I couldn't say anything.
	"Marry me, Aubrey." My eyes snapped up to his. "I'm serious. Marry me."
	I turned, ready to leave, wanting to leave, hating his trump card. A last ditch effort to hang on to something that needed to be done away with. 
	"We don't work, Rafe."
	"You're not a little girl." He whispered gently. "You aren't naive enough to believe that love doesn't claim baggage. We all have baggage. We come with it part and parcel, things we carry along, things we downsize and improve on. Things we change and exchange. Come on, Aubrey. We were made for each other. You can feel it. I can feel it."

FrzenFlame FrzenFlame Mar 24
                              I think this was a great chapter where you've introduced the main character  with the flow of the story. The explanation of her career was done beautifully... it didn't bore me. Also the last part-the heartbreak at the inevitable death of the baby was really touching.
ehmain ehmain Apr 06
 #spreadthelove I'm so sorry I'm late on reading your story!! Well, I guess technically not reading it. Lol You know I've already done that, but I promise I will leave your comments tomorrow! Again, I'm really sorry for doing this at the very last minute. 😔
ElleLeeLove ElleLeeLove Feb 24
                              My heart is breaking for Aubrey right now. I couldn't imagine watching a baby die or even be in pain. She has a very hard job.
rrmhopkins rrmhopkins Sep 03, 2016
A lot of description and back story to read through, but I really like the characters and I am excited to read their story.
Thanks, CeeCee, it's a lot better now in the edit on google too
I just reread this chapter and I think it is such a great intro! I am left feeling heartbroken for Aubrey and her job, and completely interested in her and her life!! Great character development so quick :)