Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

Aubrey (Revolving With Axis)

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Debbie Hopkins By DebbieHopkins Updated Oct 27

Cover made by: @ItsFirstMalaika.  Aubrey is spunky, smart (She's a neonatologist!), and not looking for a guy. Rafe is the quintessential pop star, living in Malibu, loving his life--- it turns out they are neighbors, with a whole lot of chemistry going on. The trouble is: she's devoutly Mormon, and comes from a very famous entertainment field family--- he's the exact opposite and has recently lost his best friend. Sparks fly--- really fly--- when these two hit it off. From the NICU to the tour bus, Montana to Mexico---will their attraction carry them through controversial differences or blossom into the forever they have been longing for?

rrmhopkins rrmhopkins Sep 03
A lot of description and back story to read through, but I really like the characters and I am excited to read their story.
I like it so far. 
                              Check the word tension, I think energy would work better. I also think his description could use a little work.
                              Also for someone who is so exhausted  and somewhat annoyed with his intrusion she agrees to go work out pretty quickly....
rrmhopkins rrmhopkins Sep 14
I like the authors note! I also like that you had a much simpler intro to Aubrey without all the tangents. Just enough information to make me want to find out more about her. I seriously love this book and the characters!!
Interesting. I strongly feel like you should work on how you started the chapter. I feel like you can reword it better. As I got to the middle it did get better. I also feel like the ending leaves you want to know more about the new character that you introduced which is a good thing.
Audrey definitely has some very strong opinions, which oddly conflict with her personal job choice *lol* Love the contrast though and it makes me wonder if she may end up compromising her personal values before we reach the end of the story.
                              
                              I look forward to reading more :)