Did You Have To Be My Mate?

Did You Have To Be My Mate?

156K Reads 1.3K Votes 18 Part Story
Kuda Dube By kukudube Completed

Carmen goes out of her way to stay away from the Los Lebos Feroz pack, even though she's a werewolf and a pack member. Their Alpha and leader of their gang Jay Gonzalez is badass, mysterious, dangerous and most of all he's Gloria's supposed other half . How will she be able to stay away from all the drama?

  • alejandro
  • alex
  • andy
  • beach
  • beta
  • break
  • broken
  • brother
  • bye
  • cake
  • carlos
  • carmen
  • chicos
  • club
  • cookies
  • darren
  • diner
  • door
  • drunk
  • epilogue
  • eva
  • fight
  • graduation
  • hangover
  • hurt
  • ice-cream
  • isabella
  • jake
  • james
  • jay
  • joe
  • kissing
  • kitchen
  • leg
  • lie
  • lobos
  • los
  • maria
  • marie
  • mike
  • mum
  • paperwork
  • party
  • proposal
  • restaurant
  • sad
  • school
  • sleeping
  • slepover
  • swimming
  • tears
  • towel
  • two
  • volleyball
  • wedding
  • wolf
  • wolves
  • years
Story_Maiden_13 Story_Maiden_13 Jul 13, 2017
I know I shouldn't ask this, but I have my very first story out, can you please take a look at it? 
                              
                              I've read this book at least 4 times now being my 5th & I hope one day my story gets this much reads
BloodyRoseThorns BloodyRoseThorns May 05, 2015
Went a little fast. Hard to understand. One minute, she's at home. Next she's at work. Next she's in the bathroom, need more details. Will keep reading though.
kukudube kukudube Nov 26, 2011
@Isabelle88 Thank you very much for reading, excuse the Spanish, I used a translator! :D
                              @bittersweetsundown I'm glad you like it, thanks for reading!
Isabelle88 Isabelle88 Nov 26, 2011
The spacing is better when its more closer together, less scrolling. And in your summary you say he is Gloria's mate, to avoid confusion you can change that to something else like he's her latest conquest or boyfriend.
Isabelle88 Isabelle88 Nov 26, 2011
I like this alot, I love the Spanish flare to it, i can relate to it being Puerto Rican/Dominican. And I really like instead of a pack its a gang, I always thought the same mentality was in both. I want to know more so off to read ch2.
kukudube kukudube Oct 12, 2011
@xxTrystxx Oh jay was just using Gloria in the cafe, it will all be clear when i add his POV in chapter 4! Thanks for reading!