Pyaar Ka Imtehaan

By LovlyFlower8

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Hi friends today I am starting to update My very 1st story ....Pyaar Ka Imtehaan..... of Manan..... Story is... More

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23
Part 24
Part 25
Part 26
Part 27
Part 28
Part 29
Part 30
Part 31
Part 32
Part 33
Part 34(a)
Part 34(b)
Part 35
Part 36(a)
Part 36(b)
Part 37(a)
Part 37(b)
Part 38
Part 39
Part 40
Part 41
Part 42
Part 43 (a)
Part 43(b)
Part 43 (c)
Part 44(a)
Part 44(b)
Part 45(a)
Part 45 (b)
Part 46
Part 47
Part 48 (a)
Part 48(b)
Part 48(c)
Part 49 (a)
Part 49(b)
Part 50(a)
Part 50(b)
Part 51(a)
Part 51(b)
Part 52(a)
Part 52 b
Part 53
Part 54 (a)
Part 54 (b)
Part 55
Part 56 (a)
Part 56(b)
Part 57
Part 58(a)
Part 58 (b)
Part 59 (a)
Part 59 (b)
Part 60 (a)
Part 60 (b+c)
Part 61(a)
Part 61(b)
Part 62(a)
Part 62(b)
Part 63 (a)
Part 63(b)
Part 64
Part 65
Part 66
Part 67
Part 68
Part 69
Part 70
Part 71(a)
Part 71(b)
Part 72
Part 73
Part 74
Part 75
Part 76(a)
Part 76(b)
Part 77
Part 78 (a)
Part 78(b)
Part 79
Part 80
Part 81
Part 82
Part 84
Part 85
Part 86
Part 87(a)
Part 87 (b)
Part 88 (a)
Part 88 (b)
Part 89 (a)
Part 89 (b)
Part 90 ( a)
Part 90 ( b)
Part 91 (a)
Part 91 (b)
Part 92
Part 93
Part 94
Part 95
Part 96 (a)
Part 96 (b)
Part 97
Part 98
Part 99
Part 100
Part 101
Part 102
Part 103
Part 104 +105
Part 106
Part 107
Part 108
Part 109
Part 110
Part 111
Part 112
Part 113
Part 114
Part 115
Part 116
Part 117
Part 118

Part 83

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By LovlyFlower8

 Hi friends......Kaise ho app sub... fit and fine na? Bolo Bolo tell tell...wanna read this update?.....

sorry for mistakes


Maddy's Gd finally agreed that he was wrong... wrong in treating Maddy and his passion for rock music... he said to himself... Madhiyam knows and respect classical music... main hi ghalat samjha k wo os music ki respect nahi karta jis ki wajha se hamare khandan ka nam hai... main ghalt tha... aur yeh bache sahi... Kishori murty ji sahi kah rahe thi... jab yeh bache hamari, hamare sanskaron ki itni izat kar sakte haan to hum in ki soch ki izat kyo nahi kar sakte... aur yeh bachi... Nandini... yeh bhi sahi thi... k bachon ki khusi k liye agar hum khud me thori si tabdeli le aye to sub thek ho jata hai... (sigh) ab mujhe samjh a gya hai k mujhe kya karna hai... bht door rah liya apney khoon se... bht zid kar li main ne bhi aur os ne bhi ab aur nahi...

Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha
Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha
Chitthiyon ko jaise mill gaya
Jaise ik naya sa pataa
Ki aisa beparwah mann pehle toh na tha

Khaali raahein, hum aankh moonde jaayein
Pahunche kahin toh bewajah

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe
Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe

And the song ended with huge applauds ... Maddy when saw towards audience then he got a shock coz his GD was also clapping for him while standing on his seat...this thing brought tears in his ear...

Nandini with smile came to maddy and then put her hand on his shoulder and said in happiness: thora sa wait aur maddy then sub sahi ho jae ga...

Maddy looked at her and then node in yes ...

After this they also left the stage...

Manish again takes over the stage and again started entertaining the audience... then he announced So guys now we are presenting a One Man Band ...to you...(making a confused face) well kya kisi ne is se pahle one man band dekha hai...main ne to nahi dekha... to chalo app k sath mil k dekhte haan...

Well I am still confuse k 1 larka itna sub kuch aik sath kaise kar sakta hai but dekhte haan... So lets welcome once again Mr Madhiyam singhania...

And Maddy came with all his instruments and again perform on AJJ mera ji karda with all his instruments...

All was shocked to see him like this ... But this time his GD have a smile on his face...on seeing him like this he got to know how talented he is...

After his performance when there was a complete silence coz audience was still in shock on seeing this performance ... His GD was the one who started clapping for him and then all others followed him...

Maddy's eyes again filled up on his Gd's gesture...and when he saw towards his Gd ... he got a happy but unexpected shock... coz his GD was standing on his seat with extended arms for his G.son...

Maddy left all things on stage and jumped from the stage towards his GD... and hugged him in happiness...Finally he got his family back...

GD: I am sorry beta... Hamein maaf kar de... Aik choti si baat samajhne me hum ne itna time laga diya...Khud ko tujh se ... Apney hi khoon se door kar liya... Lykin ab hamein samajh a gya hai...k... hum hi ghalti pe they... music classical ho ya rock... hum os ka niradar nahi kar sakte... tum bache hum... Badon k liye ab bhi classical music ki izat kar sakte ho to ab hamein bhi tumhare music ki izat karni chahaye...osey osi tarhan accept karna chaheye jaise... tum log classical music ko karte ho...(Gd holds maddy by his shoulder and then said) aur isi liye hum tum se yeh kahna chahte haan... K ab hamein koi aitraz nahi hai... tum agar apna career Rock music me banana chahte ho to bana sakte ho... lykin hamari aik shart hai...

Maddy who became happy on hearing all this from his Gd's mouth ...puased on his position and again with lil angry and complaining eyes looked at him like asking: Abhi bhi condition...?

GD smiled on seeing his Grandson and then gave a lovely pat on his cheek and said:Hamein pata hai k tumhe phir se hum pe ghusa a raha hai... lykin pahle hamari shart to sun lo... hamein yaqeen hai k os shart pe tumhe koi aitraz nahi ho ga...

Maddy folded his hands on his chest in frustration and said: Boliye kya hai ab jo app chahte haan k main maan jao... infact I think mujhe pahle hi pata hai... app nahi chahte hoon gey na... k main ghar wapis aon... wo bhi apney is music k sath... Coz Nandini ya jis k bhi kahne pe app yahan a to gaye... lykin...

GD sadly smiled on hearing his complain and doubt... but its not his fault ...coz after Maddy's parents death he treated him like this always... So he is right on his place...

GD sadly said: Nahi madhiyam... beta hum yeh chahte haan k tum ghar wapis a jao... ab hum se aur bardast nahi hota... nahi rah sakte apney hi khoon se door... jante haan hum ne tumhare sath ghalt kiya... tumhari har baat ko unsunna kiya...lykin ab hamein ehsaas ho gya hai... k strict behavior se hamesha baat nahi banti... kabhi kabhi bachon ki baton ko sunne aur samajhne se bht si batein thek ho jati haan...Madhiyam hum ne apney betey ko to kho diya hai... ab tumhe khona nahi chahtey... beta... (GD folded his hand infront of Maddy which he holds immediately in his ) and on seeing him emotional... Maddy hugged GD and said: I am sorry... I am sorry GD main ne bhi app ko ghalat samjha... I am sorry...

GD: patted his hairs in affection and after breaking apart said: Jao... tumhare dost abhi tumhara wait kar rahe hoon gay...

And Maddy ran towards backstage with happy face...

Nandini and other gang members saw this from the corner of the stage and all were very happy for Maddy especially Mukti felt very good for him...

Nandini's Amms came towards GD and said: Bhai saab app ne bilkul sahi decision liya...sometimes hum apney bachon ko aur un ki thinking ko samjahne aur accept karne me fail ho jate haan...aur yehi cheez bachon ko hum se door kar deti hai...isi liye hum badon ko chaheye k waqt rahte hi hum bachon ki soch ko samjhen aur maan leen...aur phir sangeet to bhagwan ki dain hai... chahey wo classical ho ya rock... hum os ka apmaan kyo Karen...

GD again smiled but this time a contended smile was there on his face then he said: Kishori ji mujhe app ka aur Nandini beti ka shukriya ada karna hai... jis ne time rahte hi mujhe yeh samjha diya k mujhe abhi kya karna chaheye...( a sad shadow came on his face) nahi to main apney betey k sath sath apney potey ko bhi kho deta... Hamesha k liye...

Amms: Bhai saab...shukria ki koi zarorat nahi... Main aur Nandu ko khush haan k sub thek ho gya...

Then again it was the time for Manik's Solo performance...

He set his mick on the stand and then holds its stand in a style...and music started in the background...

Manik sang...All were surprised when they heard Punjabi from his mouth...

Meri rooh ka parinda phadphadaye

Lekin sukoon ka jazeera mil na paaye
Ve ki karaan..
Ve ki karaan..

Ik baar ko tajalli toh dikha de
Jhoothi sahi magar tasalli to dila de
Ve ki karaan..
Ve ki karaan..

His powerful voice along with background music changed the atmosphere from the romantic to the rocking one...

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya
Sunle pukaar Bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya
Murshid mera, Murshid mera
Tera mukaam kamle
Sarhad ke paar Bulleya
Parvardigar Bulleya
Haafiz tera, Murshid mera (x2)

Audience started swaying their hand in air while enjoying the song and Manik started doing small dancing steps while singing

Main taan gul se lipti titli ki tarah muhajir hoon
Ek pal ko thehroon, pal mein udd jaaun
Ve main tan hoon pagdandi
labhdi ae jo raah jannat ki
Tu mude jahan main saath mud jaaun

Tere kaarvan mein shamil hona chahun
Kamiya taraash ke main kaabil hona chahun
Ve ki karaan..
Ve ki karaan..

Audience started singing along with him

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya
Sun le pukaar Bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya
Murshid mera, Murshid mera
Tera mukaam kamle
Sarhad ke paar Bulleya
Parvardigar Bulleya
Haafiz tera, Murshid mera (x2)

Raanjhana ve...
Raanjhana ve...

(Mukti and aliya)

Jis din se aashna se do ajnabi huve hain
Tanhaiyon ke lamhe sab multavi huve hain
Kyun aaj main mohabbat
Phir ek baar karna chahun
Haan...

His Magical voice with this sufi song creates hovac on audience...

Ye dil toh dhoondhta hai inkaar ke bahane
Lekin ye jism koi pabandiyan na maane
Milke tujhe, bagaawat khud se hi yaar karna chahun

(Nandini)

Mujhme agan hai baaki aazma le

Le kar rahi hoon khud ko main tere hawale

Ve Raanjhna...
Ve Raanjhna...

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya
Sunle pukaar Bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya
Murshid mera, Murshid mera
Tera mukaam kamle
Sarhad ke paar Bulleya
Parvardigar Bulleya
Haafiz tera, Murshid mera (x2)

Murshid mera, murshid mera...

After his performance Manish came on the stage and one word came from his mouth that is Wowww.

Manish came near him and patted his shoulder in a friendly way: Wow Man kya power pack performance tha... I am relly very impressed... Kyo audience tha na yeh pwer pack performance...

Audience: Yesss we want more... Once more ... Once more... Once more...

And Manish signaled Manik to sing few lines again and he sang it on public demand and all audience sang along with him word by word...

Raanjhan de yaar Bulleya
Sunle pukaar Bulleya
Tu hi toh yaar Bulleya
Murshid mera, Murshid mera
Tera mukaam kamle
Sarhad ke paar Bulleya
Parvardigar Bulleya
Haafiz tera, Murshid mera (x2)

Murshid mera, murshid mera...

Then Manik left the stage and when he came back side all friends jumped over him to congratulated him on this powerful performance...

Manik: Guys leave it for latter... Tum log ready ho for the last attack...

All gang members yes...



ok that all for now....

Now tell me do u like song selection for this concert... and what u think about this story... pyaar ka imtehan...... is it still on the same original track..... kahin main bhatak to nahi gayi.....original story se .... do mention this in your comment

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