★★★
Three stars out of five for the straightforward plot.
Author: Mfras23
Genre: Action
Review:
The summary draws the reader in with high expectations. Unfortunately these expectations aren't met and I feel that this book could use a lot of work.
The plot is straightforward: James Greene and his team pulled off a heist of 2 million (or is it billion?) dollars some years ago and have now been contacted to steal the cure for cancer.
I think that the author could improve on descriptive language. As I read, I felt that mere facts are given and that the settings and characters aren't really being described.
Right now, I'm unable to choose a favourite character because I find it hard to distinguish between most of the different characters.
Grammar should be revised as several mistakes were found.
This book can become a great novel to keep readers on their toes — keep working on your technique, you'll get there!
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Critically So
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