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Before We Bond (Review Fifty-Eight)

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Before We Bond
By annabellacx

Reviewer: DiaryOfDaisy

★Title, Cover and Blurb 7/10:

- The title is enticing, the cover a bit dull and the blurb okay, captivating enough.

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★Plot 5/10:

- Although the beginning introduces the characters, it's a bit simple. The writer could do more at creating scenes that would hold readers down. Also, the story moves at a sluggish pace but be assured, it promises drama.

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★Characters 6/10:

- The main character, Cassandra is a bit of the typical, boring/normal girl. A little spice in her character would help greatly. Blake, on the other hand seems sweet but also holds a mysterious aura.

- Digging a little deeper in the second characters can also give an insight on the main character's personality from another aspect.

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★Writing style 9/10:

- The writing style is amazing. It emphasizes on everything. The flow of the book is easy and readers can follow quite well.

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★Grammar/Structure 10/10:

- The use of grammar and structure is good. Honestly, it's the best part of the book.

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★Summary:

- If anything, the book looks simple enough. Like a reader could decipher the end.

- It can also be a good thing if the readers believe they can decode the end but are thrown into a series of plot twists. A reader's interest would grow even more and want to find out where and how he/she is wrong.

- All in all, Before We Bond is a book you should look forward to reading.

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