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Sackcloth and Ashes (Review Forty-Seven)

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Sackcloth and Ashes
By: MavisFarah

Reviewer:SilentLover0224

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Title/Cover: 10/10

- I love the title in the cover, it goes amazing with your story.

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Blurb: 9/10

- Very dark and very interesting. However, it repeats "perhaps they weren't supposed to meet" a bit too much.

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First chapter: 10/10

- I didn't see any of that coming. It was very well written and I was hooked.

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Grammar/punctuation: 9/10

- Some minor grammar mistakes, but the punctuation was amazing.

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Vocabulary: 10/10

- Very extensive and good use of the words

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Plot/pacing: 10/10

- It was very well paced, and for a minute I could actually see this is a horror movie! ❤️

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Character/character development: 10/10

- The characters were well written and I wasn't trying to figure out who was who.

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Originality: 10/10

- This was amazing the story line was fabulous and there is definitely some major touch of creativity.

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Word building: 10/10

- Lots of good words were used. The language was super believable.

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Imagery: 10/10

- Very impressive! I love all your descriptions! You balance the show and the tell part of the story very well.

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