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The Tail of Thirteen Paws (Review Fifty-Four)

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The Tail of Thirteen Paws
By: -Skylar_Rao-

Reviewer: SilentLover0224

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Title/Cover: 10/10

- It's very creative. I love the background and the font that you used.

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Blurb: 8/10

- You told us more of how you were planning on writing it, not so much the actual summary.

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First Chapter: 9/10

- Very well written, and very lovely pictures. But it was a little hard to follow.

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Grammar/Punctuation: 7/10

- There were a few noticeable mistakes, but the grammar was used correctly.

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Plot/Pacing: 5/10

- I feel like the events were really rushed.

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Vocabulary: 8/10

- It was a little rough, but otherwise correct.

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Characters/Character Development: 7/10

- Some of the characters were vague, I feel as though you could take some out.

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Originality: 9/10

- Although it was based off of Paw Patrol, I appreciate that you gave it an original twist.

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Word Building: 8/10

- The world building is a little rough, but it's an easy fix.

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Imagery: 9/10

- I could see everything that you were describing, but you gave away too many details.

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Overall: I enjoyed the read, but I feel with good proofreading and editing it could be better.

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