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BOOK SUGGESTIONS / CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II
READ--IMPORTANT. (Not a story critique!)
Ordinary
Donuts, Crusty Toothpaste, and Other Things that make me Barf
An Evil Addiction
What I Do To Pay Rent
Les Hybrides
Learning To Live Review III
The Mate He Never Wanted
Only Fools
I Am Fallen
Rays
Blood
Girl can I get a witness... ;)
The only way to win is not to play the game ;)
What the Spell?
The Devil's Apprentice
Let Me Go
Love Is Forever
Scarlet Academy
A House But Not A Home
chloelewislord's books
Poem Book Part One & Two
The Lady Of Red
Picture Your Past
The Sorcerer's Obsession
Innocence Lost
Little Things-Niall Horan fanfic
A Different Side- Glimmer (Hunger Games)
I Spy One Direction
Con Artist Legacy & Recollection of Questionable Events
Très Belle [James Harry Potter II]
Skyrim: The eagles call
Play it Again
The Creation of a Madman
If only lies that are hidden
Final Part

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BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II

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Scarlet Academy

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By NightFeather6

Hello!

This is nice! I like how at the beginning everybody's (readers) are confused... but so is the character!

We can seriously relate to her. It's cool. Nice punctuation, vocab...

Nothing really to critique on, just compliment and say CONTINUE writing!

IT HATH POTENTIAL. :)

xox,

Julian

Date: 24 June 2014

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