Author:
@Amenah___2
Cover:
It is a lovely cover but it is a lil' bit blurry at the moment (perhaps it's because I'm looking at it on my laptop vs a tablet....?). I like the lady warrior.
Blurb:
The blurb is strong. It makes me want to not only read on but also cheer for the MC who I have yet to properly meet.
Prologue:
The prologue is wonderfully executed. Though it is short, it gives you just enough for you to be keen on looking for more, and it raises questions you feel you must have answers to.
You can feel the main character's determination here. Our hero appears to be someone held down by something, but of a strong will that will not allow her to stay down.
I would very much like to read on.
Good luck, darkling!
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