Chapter 24 Plot:
Chapter 24: " I am The Prince of all Saiyans!" The androids make their move, and they prove to be trouble after all! Prince Vegeta steps into the battlefield as promised, and he proves to everyone that he will always find a way to reclaim his place. "The prince has reclaimed his throne at last!"
Also, it seems that someone is dealing with the military on their own. An unexpected reappearance catches everyone off guard! Will it be enough to snap Kakarot from his cloud of hate?
IT SEEMS THAT...
Kakarot has truly found himself not willing to step into battle due to his fears of being overwhelmed with his instincts! However, it seems he is well informed or is planning to get loads of information by pulling of a new trick or ability he had learned from the demons of Mount Pazou... with a bit of a drawback.
He can never hide his tail?
Also... someone makes an appearance, and Kakarot begins to feel what hasn't been felt in years.
A/N: Espeon804 here with another great chapter!
PUBLISHED: February 22, 2017!
WORDS: 17,319
Guys, I want your help.
I'm serious! I really want your help!
After reading this chapter, I want you guys to tell me suggestions or tips. I want to get better so that you readers can read a better story! What I mean is... this book's plot needs improvement.
Which character do you to see have more screen time?
Who needs more character development?
Who needs to lay back a bit to allow other characters to have a spotlight? (I already set aside Kakarot and Raditz. They had a lot of screen time and such...)
I'm asking you readers so that this book won't become a wreck. I feel like I'm skipping.
But! Don't go crazy with ideas. I won't take them all.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN DB, DBZ, DBGT, DBZKAI, OR DBS! Akira Toriyama owns it all! Typical disclaimer. I'm getting tired of typing it.
Key:
"Talking"
"Foreign Speech"
'Thoughts'
'Telepathy'
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- Chapter 24: "I am The Prince of all Saiyans!" -
"I'll be your opponent." Vegeta points a thumb at himself. "Don't think you'll make a laughing stock out of me. I'll wipe those smirks right off of your faces."
"Really? Prince Vegeta? You can handle us so easily?!" 20 laughs. "Raditz is far stronger than you. He can wipe the floor with you easily in Super Saiyan form. What could you possibly do with us?"
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Фанфіки"You see, three years later in the 12th of May... around 10 am... it's when they appear to make themselves known." Shadow figures float through his vision, destroying cities around them. "These guys... they were created by The Red Ribbon Army." "Let...
