Chapter 10: When hate overrides compassion.

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Chapter 10 Plot:

Chapter 10: "When hate overrides compassion." When the Saiyans were finally getting a bit of peace, the Humans strikes back in a way Kakarot least expects! Kakarot's childhood is turned into ash, and in fury, he seeks out to hunt them down. However... when Kakarot fails to do one thing... Vegeta finally snaps. He had enough at last!

A/N: Espeon804 here with another great chapter!

PUBLISHED ON: October 28, 2016

It's almost Halloween. I want to do a Halloween special chapter, but... I got too much going on. I have to do Senior crap or I won't graduate... so I can't do a special. :(

HOWEVER! If you are one of those people who likes to do a fanfiction of a fanfiction... (does that exist?) I will allow you to do a special. Just send me the link through my private messaging (space it out or the link won't come through) and I'll happily read it.

Just read this chapter first to get an idea.

Then again... that's impossible. Since when do people do a fanfiction of a fanfiction. That sounds hard. XD

And it sounds stupid. But if you want to, go ahead!

Why am I asking this? Let's move on.

This literally happened:

Me: (Checks Google Docs on computer after typing on phone)

Me: Okay, Let's see how many pages.

(10 is shown on stroll bar)

Meh.

(20)

Okay.

(Stops at 29)

Oh. Well, that's-

(Begins to increase to 35)

Whoa, okay now-

(Goes to 45)

Stop! That's enough!
(Goes to 53)

NO! TOO MANY! STOP! STOP!
(Stops at 64)

Ooooh... myyyy... goooood.

I should relax. But hey, this chapter is a special after all. (I probably have no life.)

Then again, this chapter only has around 23,000 words.

Sometimes... I write my chapters around 9-12pm, and during those hours, I sometimes begin to nod off.

Especially at 10PM.

So... the result of that is I end up writing crazy things. Sometimes, I end up typing what my current thoughts are. One time, I was falling asleep while typing. In this chapter, I was suppose to write:

"Kakarot is furious after what had occurred. His eyes turn cold, and his thoughts are nothing more than to make them suffer."

Instead, I wrote this craziness:

"Kakarot is furious for what had occurred. His eyes turn bold, and his thoughts he maybe can go after the animal soldier beat them. He can. If they are animals does that... he can eat them."

Yes. That is literally what my half-sleep self wrote. Every single word is accurate, even the ones that don't make sense. XD

... I need to stop writing while I'm sleepy.

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