"Going once, going twice, SOLD!"
The gavel fell with a loud bang onto the auctioneers table. Kelly stepped forward, watching as the eager man rushed forward, money in hand, dropping it on the table before he grabbed her. He could hardly wait to get...
So many of you have read this story and given it amazing reviews! I thank you SO much for that. It is extremely gratifying to know that I've written words that so many of you have enjoyed reading and a story line that you have dedicated countless hours to following.
I do realize that this story is full of grammar mistakes, plot holes, a mixed up timeline when it comes to Kelly's age, etc. I also realize that the character Peter Jeffreys had a strange beginning. He fell in love at first sight and acted very forward when it came to Kelly.
I have re-written this story in an attempt to fix the timeline, the age problems, grammar mistakes and write out Peter Jeffreys.
It's basically a second draft of the story. It's more graphic, more detailed and the plot line varies a bit near the end. It's also not as long.
If you wouldn't mind reading this, I'm going to post it to the end of this book in chapter form, I would GREATLY appreciate feedback, whether it's good or bad.
I want to eventually fix this story so it's good enough to publish, but I need it to be approved by you guys first. You are my first priority.
So, I hope you enjoy the second draft of Traffic, please leave comments or votes or even message me as feedback.
Thank you so much!
-CJ Chandler
P.S. What do you think of this for the new cover photo for Traffic? I would get rid of the 'rewrite' part, since I thought I'd be adding this as a separate story, but didn't. Comment if you like this cover!!
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