P: Salutations*

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It's a blessing 

In my eyes 

When people say goodbye 

In my culture 

There is no such word 

In their language

They end the conversation with a click of the phone

No goodbyes

No salutations

Not even a hello 

The call is for importance

No laughing

No pain 

Merely passing information from one location to the next 

In my eyes

As an American 

It does hurt to say goodbye 

But even the words 

"I love you"

Must be tried

Words are mere documents

Not occations

Not emotions

When my mother is on the phone 

She knows she must say she loves me

At first when I introduced it when she was about to hang up 

She said

Son, nonsense 

Love isn't something you say 

It's something you show 

But it's still an assurance

To hear it is so sweet

The same goes for good byes,

Saluting, and a small greeting

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Response To: "Arrivals" - MicahMackey 

You don't have to respond to these. I'm reading your poetry so I'm responding to it since I'm bored. However, when people say Mr. unless it's spelled out as Mister. The dot is there to represent shorting so when you say Mrs Hughes it should be Mrs. Hughes same for Mr. Thomas. It's up to you to change it though since it doesn't change the meaning to the poem. Great work though, I like your style :)

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