Achieving For The Greater Good

P: My Whisper*

Whispering

I whisper

As the night goes on 

In the dark 

The pitch black consumes my heart

As a fallen 

Unknown to what may become 

Of the pure 

And insane part of me overcomes 

What sanity I have left 

The whispers

Have they won?

In the light

The next morning

My tainted heart has begun 

To beat 

In my shell

Protected from the light 

But then she whispers

Come back to me 

I am shaken 

What is this fright 

She is my light

From the inside

My heart starts to fail

She whispers again

"My knight" 

"You must prevail" 

Suddenly, my heart stops

My breath it weakens

But I begin to feel the purity mask the tainted

My heart 

It begins

To fight once more

Against the doubt 

Against my weakness

I have prevailed

Against the whispers

In the dark 

The ones that remind me 

That I am alone 

That I am binded 

But she is my weapon

My whisper 

My love

For she saves me from the darkness

Those whispers that never give up.

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Response To: "Whispers In The Dark" By MicahMackay

**Hope you don't mind me reading your poetry and then making a reply to it. I see this as a way to improve my own poetry. Your poem was interesting and I liked it. The last three lines didn't make sense to me until I made this in response. Voted for your poem because it's awesome. Great work.