A Birthday Wish

A Birthday Wish

9.3K Reads 156 Votes 11 Part Story
lollipop101 By lollipop101 Completed

this story is about a normal teenage girl, called Arabelle Pearce, who happens to fall in love with her best friends(Michelle Cohen's) older brother(jake Cohen). A stupid and regretted birthday wish causes Jake to dissapear. Will he return? And if he does will he still be the same person he was before?

  • aquamarine
  • balcony
  • bed
  • birthday
  • brave
  • bye
  • cake
  • campaign
  • candles
  • cards
  • crying
  • disappeared
  • disgusted
  • dusty
  • family
  • films
  • fragile
  • guilty
  • happy
  • heart
  • help
  • hospital
  • jake
  • kiss
  • love
  • loved
  • michelle
  • money
  • owls
  • parents
  • preschool
  • psychiatrist
  • question
  • redretted
  • regretted
  • responsibility
  • selfish
  • silently
  • stupid
  • support
  • surprise
  • tears
  • tired
  • weird
  • wish
layd33_Zana layd33_Zana Sep 10, 2011
awwh this chapter was good but short!! very short. there was a spelling mistake but i cnt remember where it was :S sorry
                              but other then that i liked it :)
lollipop101 lollipop101 Jul 19, 2011
@HottPinkk i wrote this story before that film came out but i understand why you might think that but i started writing this stories about 1.5 / 2 yrs ago i just didnt know about watty then so i never uploaded it
                              
lollipop101 lollipop101 Jul 12, 2011
@maryamidu she gets angry because she is pissed with arabella for getting with her brother
Baileeeee Baileeeee Mar 10, 2011
@lollipop101 Your writing is AMAZING. I'm starting the next chapter right now!
jkshakespeare jkshakespeare Mar 07, 2011
You know, i honestly enjoyed this first part and i now i must click part two, its like i have no free will of my own
HiddenTalent HiddenTalent Jan 07, 2011
oh-oh, he very mad at michelle, i hope she dosent do something stupid like commit suicide