PJO fanfic rant/normal rant

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Another problem with these is that the characters are athletic- Starbucks- stereotypes.

A: The main heroes can NOT be Adidas slides people.

B: they cannot be an athletic type. NO SPORTS JOCKS IN CAMP HALF-BLOOD.

C: NO STARBUCKS AND UGGS.

I swear the main characters are not any of those kinds of people. You know why? Because most of the time in schools those are the bullies/sluts/*ssholes

The popular kids, , the ones who cause sad stories like Amanda Todd to come into existence. Bottom line is that they do not deserve to be the hero in a story as awesome as PJO. And it pisses me off SO MUCH when somebody says "I put on my Adidas sandles." You could see that in your head, but PLEASE do not write that down. You could just write shoes. Rick did not specify shoe type, or outfits, or anything like that really.

So why do it if it just creates more work for you?

PJO FANFIC PART OVER

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This goes for ALL writers, commas are not against the law! Yes, this ( , ) little magical punctuation mark of awesomeness can be used by ANYONE :D

I have read many books on here that have a fantastic concept, or a great plot with great characters, but they never use commas ever. So many tender moments have been OBLITERATED by the LACK of COMMAS. Please people, use them.

Also, grammar is a huge problem.

There was one book I read where two people were arguing, and the girl made a KILLER point but the author misspelled a vital word. Thus the scene lost it's firepower <- PUN.

Capital lettered arguments. They can be awesome if used correctly. BECAUSE ARGUING LIKE THIS FOR FIVE PAGES IS REALLY REALLY REALLY HELLA ANNOYING.

Fanfic part over

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So in my Chorus class, we had a sub since my chorus teacher is out on Maternity leave.

Now I have a preeeetttyyy uncommon name. It's Cosette. And you all now how substitute teachers are pretty bad at pronouncing names? Hers was the most "interesting".

Some how she twisted it so that she said "Crosatay"

So I had no idea she was calling me until he said my last name. So I said "That's the weirdest version I've ever heard anyone call me by."

Now I know that wasn't very nice. And I did say sorry later. But for some reason everyone thought I said "Worst version" so everyone yelled

"RUDE"

And then I got a couple

"That was so mean" s

And a few

"Why did you say that?"s

And even some

"Stop being so mean to her."

So yeah.

In all fairness my name is spelled

C-O-S-E-T-T-E.

Not C-R-A-S-A-T-AY

So idk how she got that.

Now I am a complete (female dog) in the eyes of every girl in that class

Also, it was ONE SENTENCE.

But yes I said sorry anyways.

Yup.

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