My Beloved Surrogate ~M.Y.G / P.J.M~

Regarding chapter Fifty Two(M)

A/N :

I read the chapter again and again...I had read it before publishing too. Idk ...does it sound cheap? ...I mean ..I thought a lot about it. Should I have made it soft..like of course they would have had their first night but in a sweet way. Like filled with shy talkings, gentle touches and a sweet love making moment ( only one round) ? ...This ..that I published ...does it feel like the Yoongi here is totally a 'horny dickhead' as Jimin called him? ...I actually wanted to show their intensity and the amount of want for each other they had within themselves in these past years. Like if you truly love someone then you get separated then spending such a long time without them and then finally when you have them close to you and even as your spouse ( which means you have a right to touch each other too without much hesitation) so all those buried feelings or desire whatever you call it ...It starts..  .yk ..we have this sudden urge to make that person ours. So I wanted to show this in Yoonmin too. And about Yoongi's personality here. Of course you'd never find a person who's totally perfect or pure. We all have different sides. Yoongi is a fully grown up adult man handling a huge company. So of course this 'being intimate with your life partner' ( right life partner whom you have chosen not just forced to be with) is a common thing and every one desires for that , right? ..and of course as I have given his dialogues. He's the same decent Yoongi but also can be lil romantic and dirty but only for his husband.He has both sides just like any other person. We just show a decent side in front of society but show our every side to the special person. That's also what I tried of showing here by his character. Idk if I succeeded in doing so or not. And obviously Jimin too wanted it. It was mutual. It's nothing like Jimin was refusing but Yoongi forcefully did it. Of course not. I just added that bickering part for a lil fun because

Yoonmin= sweet bickering

And lastly..I wanted to try writing a smut part. And you guys also said I can give option 1...tho you said it's totally my choice..so I tried. I just didn't want to make it all about only dirty sex. I wanted to show an intense feeling to unite, some funny moments along with sweet ones and of course the first union of Yoonmin.

So what do you guys think? ..is it ok..like ok ok? ..or should I delete it and make a plain soft one with a lil 🤏 bit of smut ...like Yoongi entered, they talked then they came closer, had a intimate time ( I'll cut it short not in details) then skip to next morning..  like that?

What should I do? I am asking because I can think whatever I want in my mind. I'm writing here so that you guys read and enjoy it. If you don't like it it'd be a waste to publish such writing :(

Please do tell me your opinion

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