The Son and the Sparrow(Version 3/4, readable)

The Son and the Sparrow(Version 3/4, readable)

9K Reads 130 Votes 66 Part Story
Jacquelyn Rainville By shellpaperheart Completed

Leon Arthur used to be a criminal, a leader of a malicious group called the flock, but when his wife became pregnant, he decided to do the right thing. He gave up his sinful life to give his son a bright future. He sent fhe flock to jail, so he could escape. 
If only he could escape. 
Five years and three months later, his son is dead. Leon's very existance is shattered. Then one day he sees his son's ghost. It's a miracle, surely. His son's ghost tells him he must murder the man responsible for his death, and only then will his little boy come back to life. Leon must delve back into his dark past, searching for the truth, for the man that tore apart his family, without falling victim to its dangers and seductive treasures. He must face the people he once trusted, the people who would now love nothing more than to put a bullet in his head in order to reclaim meaning to his life.

EvanishingRose EvanishingRose Apr 20, 2013
I just started reading this and I really like it. Already it's very suspenseful and I can't wait to read the rest. :)
shellpaperheart shellpaperheart Jun 09, 2011
@fergie1984 my goal in life is to make you cry while reading every one of my stories >:)
fergie1984 fergie1984 Jun 07, 2011
@fergie1984 BTW I am trying to find out what kind of symbol are sparrows in this story ? I know that sparrows could symbolize hope, rebirth, love... 
fergie1984 fergie1984 Jun 07, 2011
So sad... I have tears in my eyes and it's just first chapter... Damn you for describing everything as if it was  real... It must be hard for Leon to lost his son, he seems like a strong person, he still didn't give up.... 
Novelist Novelist May 21, 2011
haha! my apologies. i wont shoot =p 
                              keep trying por favor 
shellpaperheart shellpaperheart May 21, 2011
@Novelist I might since you have a gun in my face ;)
                              And thank you. I hope you keep reading. I'm trying to post the latest chapter but wattpad won't work with me right now.