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alexisdotcom By alexisdotcom Completed

"why won't you just let me go?" 

Blakely is fifteen and when her and her dad get into a fight, she storms out the house. Only to be taken to a place in which she's forced to stay.

AwesomeWriter103 AwesomeWriter103 Jun 07, 2016
This is a great start for a first chapter! On to the next one!
LuciferLikeThoughts LuciferLikeThoughts Mar 02, 2016
When I read "surprise" I thought she a gonna be saved by someone BUT NOPE
AwesomeWriter103 AwesomeWriter103 Jun 07, 2016
Okay, first of all, I'm really enjoying this. Second of all, you writing is amazing. You're doing really well so far. I belive you might have me hooked to this story. 😉
LyricQuotes LyricQuotes Jan 22
I love how none of the names are cliche like Mike, Bob, Taylor, etc.