"why won't you just let me go?"
Blakely is fifteen and when her and her dad get into a fight, she storms out the house. Only to be taken to a place in which she's forced to stay.
This is a great start for a first chapter! On to the next one!
When I read "surprise" I thought she a gonna be saved by someone BUT NOPE
Okay, first of all, I'm really enjoying this. Second of all, you writing is amazing. You're doing really well so far. I belive you might have me hooked to this story. 😉