The Good Demon [KNY]

By Carmelizedunipn

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Akai Suisei was one of the first people Muzan changed. The young boy wanted to grow strong and proud like his... More

Part 1: The Night Everything Changed
Part 2: The Start of a Thousand Year Journey
Part 3: Cut short
Part 4: F@ck, This is Boring
Part 5: Freedom
Part 6: The Demon Slayers
Part 7: Friends or Enemies?
Part 8: Another Life
Part 9: Training
Part 10: The First Hunt (1/2)
Part 11: The First Hunt (2/2)
Part 12: We Aren't
Part 13: Advice from the Flame Pillar
The Red Comet's Bio
Part 14: Mount Natagumo
Part 15: Spider Fight
Part 16: The Boar and Sun
Part 17: Bad Memories
Valentines Day
Part 18: Mental and Physical Pain
Part 19: The Sun Breather
Part 21: The Infinity Train
Part 22: What Do I Have to do Again?
Part 23: Strike Back
Part 24: How Do You Fight a Train?
Part 25: Fight Fire With Fire
Part 26: It's Cold
Part 27: Morning Training With an Unlikely Opponent
Part 27.5:
Part 28: Lions and Toys
Part 28.5: Misfortune
Part 29: The Flambouyant Jackass
Part 30: Rest and Preparation
Part 31: Improv and Infiltration
Art: Akai Drinking Angrily
Part 32: Search and Sanitation
Part 33: Attraction and Deception
Bonus Part: Apologies
Part 34: Tied Up
Part 35: Not all There
Update:
Part 36: The Rage of The Sun
Part 37: Rage of The Red Comet
Bonus Part: Roommates
Imma Be Real With You...
Update/new OC?
Part 38: The Siblings (1/3)
Part 39: The Siblings (2/3)
Part 40: The Siblings (3/3)
Part 41: Breakdown
Part 41.5: Good Morning
Part 42: Self Harm
Part 43: Self Improvement
Bonus Part: Life After Dark
Pat 44: End of Training
Part 45: A New Makeover
Imma Just Ask it Now:
Bio of The Twin Comets
Part 46: An Invitation
Part 47: Hanging Out
Part 48: Tokito Muichiro Doesn't Give a Shit
Part 49: Tokito Muichiro Still Doesn't Give a Shit
Part 50: Fighting the Mist Pillar
Part 50.5: The Girl in The Hot spring (14+?)
Part 51: A Revelation
Part 52: A Letter From Your Father
Part 53: Battle With The Multiplying Demon
Part 54: Burning Resolve (1/4)
CLOSED! Halloween Event Voting
Halloween Vote Results: Pretty Dissapointed TBH
Special Part: Halloween Night (Modern AU)
Part 55: Burning Resolve (2/4)
Part 56: Burning Reasolve (3/4)
Part 57: Burning Resolve (4/4)
Part 58: The Coward's Bitter End
Part 59: Everything is Okay
Part 60: One More Mission
Part 61: Clashing Demons
Part 62: The Battle on The Mountain Continues
Voting: Vote For a Lemon
Shinobu X Giyu Lemon
Teaser:
Part 63: Raging Soul
TEASER:
Part 64: Burning Body
TEASER:
I Am Still Alive.
Part 65: The Demonized Slayer
The Art
Part 66: His Return...
Part 67: The Truth
Part 68: Regrouping
Part 69: Warm-Up
Part 70: Tenacity
Part 71: The Festival
Part 72: You Promised, Uncle...
Part 73: Change of Plans
Part 74: Come on, then.
Part 75: Surprises
Part 76: Power
Part 77: Hunger
Part 78: A Promise
Part 79: The Origin (1/2)
Part 80: The Origin (2/2)
Part 80.5: You Never Asked
Akai Suisei: Full Bio
Alternate History: Fear The Red Comet
Part 81: Hamon
Part 81.5: Medicine
Part 82: Poison
Part 83: Whooping
84: Tension
Survey:
Part 85: Heat
Part 86: Tantrum
Part 87: Steam
Part 88: All I Want
Part 87.5: Squeaky Clean
Part 89: Regrets
Part 90: Warmth
Part 91: Embrace

Part 20: Target Practice

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Akai sat on the porch of the Butterfly Estate. He was disappointed he couldn't aid Tanjiro in his quest for answers. He sighed and tried to think of something else to take his mind off things. He wanted to have a move that would be able to hit targets at a range. He had his Star Serpent move for closing distance, but he didn't have a move for ranged battle. He thought about it for a moment. Then it hit him.

"The spider demon..." Akai remembered the demon's use of his demonic strength to turn small rocks into bullet-like projectiles.

Akai nodded to himself and ran to his room. He grabbed a spare pile of clothes and ran outside. He went to the wooden fence surrounding the estate and nailed the clothes onto it. He nailed them up so they would look like the silhouette of a person/demon. Akai then ran back to where he was a good ways away and picked up a small rock.

"Okay... here goes." Akai wound up his arm and swung with all his might. The rock flew out at such a high speed it turned orange. It flew towards the fence and blew a hole in it.

Now, this would have been good.

Except he missed the target.

By twenty feet.

"Damn." Akai grumbled. He picked up a stone and went to try again.

Missed.

Missed.

Missed.

And missed again.

Akai was growing ever more impatient by the minute.

Miss.

Miss.

Miss.

Miss.

"FUCK!!!" Akai stomped his foot. The fence was littered with red hot holes. Nearly all the holes rested twenty feet from the target, no closer. It was as if Akai meant to miss.

"How in the hell!?" Akai wheezed and wound up to throw another. The flaming pebble blew through the fence once again. But he had finally made headway, as that particular shot had moved closer by two inches.

"Okay! Now let's get a little closer!" Akai gripped another rock and swung to throw. The rock flew through the air and connected with the fence.

He missed the target by thirty feet that time.

Akai's arms and legs slowly glowed orange as he clenched his jaw.

"HOW IN THE FUCK!?!?!?" Akai screamed.

Akai would spend the coming days testing his aim with rocks. The closest he would get to hitting the target was fifteen feet. His farthest from the target would be forty feet. He also spent his time checking on the trio from Mount Natagumo as they did their recovery training. Although it mostly consisted of Akai giving Zenitsu death glares whenever he got near Aoi.

"Okay. Seventeen thousand eight hundred and thirty-second shot is the one! Please hit it!!!" Akai panted with exhaustion. It was his seventh day of target practice. He just knew this one throw was the one. 

That was a lie to himself.

He missed the target by four feet that time. By now entire chunks were missing from the fence. And it seemed the entire fifty-foot section of fence would collapse entirely with just a few more shots.

"Okay. One more." Akai's sanity sat on the edge. It wasn't sure what would break first, the fence or Akai's spirit.

"And...!" Akai wound up his arm and thrust it forward as hard as he could. The rock flew out of his hand like a small comet and burst forward. It missed the target by four feet.

"...!!!" Akai's entire body lit up with heat before he opened his mouth and let out a burst of fire. He got on his hands and knees and repeatedly slammed his forehead into the ground, causing it to split open and gush with blood. After about two minutes of this, he sighed and went inside. He slowly traversed the halls with a face covered in blood. He was completely indifferent to the matter.

"Akai! Are you alright!?" Aoi, who had just left the infirmary saw Akai's face and ran over in concern.

"I'm fine. It's just that the blood is a little messy." Since Akai's forehead wounds had healed, the only thing left to inconvenience him was the sticky blood all over his face.

"You idiot. Come here." Aoi grabbed his hand and led him to her room.

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Akai was sitting on Aoi's bed as she wiped the blood off his face with a towel. Once the towel had too much blood, she's wash it off by dunking it into a bucket of water. After which she's take the towel back out, squeezes the water out of it, and goes back to cleaning the face of the dumbass who split his head open in a rage.

"How did this happen?" Aoi grumbled as she wiped Akai's forehead.

"I don't know..." Akai was too embarrassed to answer.

"Oh please, Akai we're not kids. Answer me." Aoi scoffed.

"I was mad at myself." Akai took in a deep breath and said.

"Mad at yourself? Why?" Aoi's face lit up with concern.

"I've been practicing throwing rocks so I could attack from far away. But I keep missing." Akai gave his answer.

"That was why you did this? It's not even that bad!" Aoi wiped Akai's head harder, annoyed by his idiocy.

"I missed seventeen thousand throws, Aoi." Akai said to better emphasize his frustration. Aoi stifled a laugh, making Akai pout with annoyance. "Don't you dare laugh!" Akai growled, making Aoi start to chuckle. "Don't laugh!" Akai whined, making Aoi break into laughter. She clutched her stomach as she laughed uncontrollably. "You're so mean." Akai looked away and muttered as she continued laughing.

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Aoi had finished cleaning Akai's head. She and Akai were sitting together on the side of her bed.

"I don't know what I can do to fix this." Akai sighed, referring to his garbage aim.

"Why don't you just change it up, like using more than one rock?" Aoi suggested.

...

...

...

...

"I am going to marry this girl." Akai swore to himself.

"That's it!!!" Akai shot up and threw his arms around Aoi.

"Wha!?!?" Aoi shrieked as Akai began nuzzling his face into her collarbone. 

"Oh, you're the best, Aoi!!!" Akai said ecstatically. He lifted his face up and placed a kiss on her cheek before he let her go. He turned around and ran out of her room.

Aoi, whose face was the brightest red and fuming with steam, layed down. She covered her head with a pillow and let out a muffled scream as she writhed in embarrassment on her bed.

Akai flew out of the estate and landed on the pebbly ground of the garden. He walked to his fence and turned to the ground. Instead of just one rock, he scooped up one and a half dozen small rocks in his hand. He took in a deep breath and spoke.

"Breath of The Cosmos... Fifth Form..." Akai whispered. He got in position and readied his arm. Then suddenly, he swung with all his power, letting the rocks spread out into a curtain of destructive red-hot bullets. "METEOR SHOWER!!!" The rocks showered the area around the target like the pellets of a shotgun, obliterating the entire top half of the target. The force and power caused the already weakened fence to collapse, showering the ground with splintered and burnt wood. "Yes!!!" Akai exclaimed and pumped his fist.

"Akai, what was that!?" Akai heard Shinobu shout from inside.

"No..." Akai realized what he had just done.

Akai was forced to rebuild that entire fence from scratch.

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