Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Neil recalls past final part

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 113:

At the time of the night, the moon was shining in the sky and the stars were twinkling over the hospital. Neil was standing in the room and was looking at Avni who was unconscious.

Neil thinks.

Flashback:

It was the time of the night, Avni came into the room by keeping her hand on her belly, she pressed her lips and goes to sit on the bed. She was not able to walk because she had a sprain in her foot because of the evening incident.

Neil entered the room while talking on the phone and Avni looked at him and passed him a faint smile. Neil signed what happened. Avni shook her head. Neil nods but he understood by seeing her face that something is wrong. Neil cuts the call and turns to her. Neil came to Avni.

Neil: what happened, you are looking low.

Avni kept the hand on her abdomen.

Avni: It is aching here.

Neil sat.

Neil: where?

Avni touched her belly. Neil touched her and checked her pulse.

Neil: since when it is aching?

Avni: Now. In the evening, I felt a pain in my back but I thought it is because of stumbling then it was fine but now it is aching here.

Neil: you lay, let me talk to the doctor.

Avni nods. She rests her back on the pillow.

Neil: Avni, lay properly.

Avni: give me some time, I will lay slowly.

Neil: ok.

Neil got up and dialled the doctor's number.

Neil: Hello, Doctor Prachi. Sorry to disturb you at this time but Avni is having a pain in her lower abdomen.

Dr: why? Did she eat something?

Avni hugs her belly and pressed her lips.

Neil: actually.

Neil told her about the birds incident.

Dr: Doctor Neil, I am sending you the prescription in your message box, give her that and bring her to my hospital tomorrow.

Neil: I can bring her now also if any gynaecologist is available.

Dr: I am out of town else I will suggest you come now but don't worry, give her that medicine she will feel better.

Neil: ok.

Neil cuts the call and turns his face to Avni. He goes to her.

Neil: is it aching more?

Avni nods. The phone beeps. Neil opened the message.

Neil: I am going to purchase these medicines, ok. I will be back soon, ok.

Avni nods.

Neil goes and comes back soon. Shweta and Bebe were sitting with Avni. Neil came and sat with her.

Neil: Avni, medicine.

Neil fed medicine to Avni and sat beside her. He was caressing her hair. Soon, Avni slept.

Shweta: I think, she got relief.

Neil looked down then he looked at Avni. Neil caressed Avni's hair. Neil looked at Bebe and Shweta.

Neil: mom, Bebe, Avni is fine you both can go and have a rest.

They nod.

Shweta: if you need anything, do tell me.

Neil nods. They go, Neil thinks. He got up and locked the door then he came back and sat. Neil caressed her hair then he goes to his side and lays. Neil was looking at Avni and his eyes gets heavy then he slept.

Flashback ends.

Neil's phone rings and he came back to reality. Neil looked around and realised that he is in the hospital. Neil squeezed his nose and wipes his eyes and face. Neil took a deep breath and took out his phone. It was Arnav's number. Neil thinks. He rubs his nose with the back of his wrist and picked up the phone.

Neil: Hello.

Arnav: Hello, Neil, how are you?

Neil: Fine, you say, Bhai?

Arnav: fine. Ab, wo where is Avni? I dialled her number but she did not receive my call. Is she alright?

Neil looked at Avni.

Neil: wo, Bhai, she is sleeping.

Arnav: she is fine, right?

Neil: yes, Bhai, she is fine. She slept earlier because of the effect of the medicine.

Arnav: Neil, why I am feeling you are laying. Already, I am feeling restless please tell me the truth.

Neil in mind: what should I do? I should tell the truth to Bhai or not?

Neil thinks and Arnav again called his name.

Neil: wo, Bhai, Avni is in hospital.

Arnav was shocked.

Neil: but don't worry, she is fine, she had pain in her abdomen and her haemoglobin was also low so we have transfused the blood. The doctor has given her a sleeping dose now she is sleeping. She is fine.

Arnav: you are in your hospital.

Neil: yes.

Arnav: I am coming.

Arnav was about to move.

Neil: no, Bhai, no need for this. If you come here then others will get tensed. Trust me, Avni is fine and we will go home in the morning if you want, you can come there. Please understand.

Arnav rubs his mouth.

Arnav: ok, please Neil, take care of her, please, she is my only sister.

Neil: you don't need to say this. I will take care of her.

Arnav was silent.

Neil: Bhai, please don't tell others about it they will take stress unnecessarily, please.

Arnav: ok. Take care, bye.

Neil: bye, Bhai.

Neil cuts the call, he looked at Avni and caressed her hair. Neil kissed her forehead. Neil looked at Avni.

The sun rises and the people start their day. The roads were floating with the vehicles.

In the room of the hospital, Avni was laying unconsciously. She stirs and moves her hand. Avni opened her eyes after a few attempts of opening her eyes. She slowly opens her eyes and shut them again. She opens her eyes and looks at the roof. She looks around and realised that she is in the hospital. She thinks. Avni came back to reality by hearing the sound of opening the door. Avni looked there.

Neil entered the room and saw Avni is awake. Neil smiled to see her and came to her. Neil caressed her hair and kissed her forehead. Avni closed her eyes.

Neil: good morning, love. How are you now?

Avni: fine.

Neil smiled.

Neil: ok then let's check this.

Neil checked her pulse and eyes then he checked her Blood pressure and Avni was looking at him.

Neil: hmm, PB is normal. First, we will do your blood test then I will get something for you to eat. OK.

Avni nods. Neil smiled. He goes out and comes back in a few minutes. The doctor also comes with him.

Doctor: Good morning.

Avni: morning.

Doctor: how are you?

Avni: better.

Doctor: that's good. She checked her eyes.

Doctor: see, Avni, you are mature and you don't need anyone's advice, especially from an outsider but as a doctor, I want to tell you some things. Avni, now you are weak and you need complete bed rest at least for some weeks. Not only this but you also have to take medicine on time and take care of yourself. Avni, I know, it is a difficult phase of your life and you will overcome it with time but you should also be careful. If you will not take care of yourself then it can lead to more problems in the future. Did you understand my point?

Avni was looking at her.

Doctor: maybe, you will face problems in your pregnancy in the future.

Avni was shocked. Neil looked at Avni.

Doctor: See, I don't want to scare you but as a doctor, it is my responsibility to make you aware of the truth. I am a doctor, I have seen many cases where ladies got pregnant just after a few months of their miscarriage but I also saw the ladies who cried for the babies just because of their negligence so I just want to suggest you that if you want to become a mother then you have to have a proper rest and take care of yourself. Understood.

Avni nods.

Doctor: good.

The doctor smiled, she looked at Neil who blinked his eyes and the doctor goes. Neil turns to Avni and smiled. Neil sat beside her.

Neil: hmm, so did you hear, what did the doctor say? Take care of yourself. Now, you will think that how can I take care of myself by laying on the bed? Right? Well, you can. Do you know how?

No response. Avni looked down.

Neil: no, ok, let me tell you. You can take care of yourself by having a balanced diet. You can take care of yourself by having medicine on time. You can take care of yourself by keeping your mind positive, I know, it is difficult but anything can happen if you try and put the effort into that. Hmm.

Neil holds her hands in his hands. Avni looked at the hands then she looked at Neil.

Neil: And your Neil, your family is with you so there is nothing to worry about anything. Isn't it? Hmm.

Neil smiled. Avni too smiled slightly. Neil sighs to see her.

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