Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Neil's unbearable pain

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 111:

It was the time of the morning, the sun was shining over the Khanna mansion. Neil fastly entered his room and goes to the cupboard. He opened that and saw Avni's clothes are there. Neil sighs by closing his eyes then he closed the cupboard but his peace was for a few seconds. Neil turned and something strikes his mind.

Neil: she also had clothes in that cupboard.

Neil was shocked and his eyes falls on the paper on the floor near the dressing table. Neil got another shock and the fear engulfed him. Neil slowly goes there and picks it up with shaking hands. Neil gulps. He opened that.

Neil reads: Neil, I am going to the office. Sorry for going without informing you.

Neil got angry. He throws the chit.

Neil: why don't you ever listen to me? Always being arbitrary.

Neil was angry.

On the other side, in a building, Avni was sitting in her cabin and was studying a file. The door opened and Avni looked up, Neil entered the office and closed the door at his back. Avni frowns to see him.

Avni: Neil.

Neil comes to her.

Avni: what are you doing here?

Neil: exactly, what are you doing here?

Avni frowns then she smiled.

Avni: what do you mean by that. It is my office if I will not come here then who will come.

Neil: don't be so smart, Avni, you very well know what I mean?

Avni looked at him. Neil closed his eyes and bit his lower lip to control his anger and sighed. He opened his eyes and sighed again.

Neil: Avni, you need rest so plllleeasse, please let's go home and have rest.

Avni: Neil, I am fine a lot of work is pending, I did a mistake, I should not let the work on them.

Neil: Avni, you can do it after some days, you need to rest now.

Avni: trust me, Neil, I am fine.

Neil closed his eyes and rubs his forehead and moves his hand to his mouth and he opened his eyes and signed.

Neil: Avni, don't be stubborn please listen to me. Let's go home, you can continue your work after some days. Right now you are not in a state to sit. You have to take a rest.

Avni: Neil, don't worry about me, I will manage, I am fine.

Neil got angry.

Neil: no, you are not fine, you had a...

Neil stopped. His lips were trembling. Avni was looking at him, she looked down at the file.

Avni: Neil, I am fine and I can't go home now I have a meeting in a while.

Neil looked at Avni angrily. Avni saw the time on her watch.

Avni: They will come in a few minutes.

Avni stole a gaze at Neil and again looked at the file. Neil banged his hand on the table and Avni closed her eyes tightly. Neil glared at her for some time, Avni opened her eyes and slowly looked at Neil who was looking at her. Their eyes locked, Neil was in anger, he broke the eye lock and looked down in anger. Avni also looked down. Neil glanced at Avni once then he goes from there furiously. Avni was looking at him, she thinks.

Neil entered the hospital and was in a bad mood, he doesn't want to force Avni as she is in deep grief and his any harsh word can create a crack in their relationship. The doctors were wishing him, he nods but was not in a good mood. A couple stopped Neil in a way, the man was carrying a baby. They were crying.

Man: Doctor, humari madad kijiye. (Doctor, please help us.)

Neil: pehle aap log rona band kijiye aur bataen mujhe kya howa? (first of all, stop crying and tell me what happened?)

Man: ye humari beti hai. Doctor keh rahe hain is ke dil main ched hai aur wo log bohat zyada paise le rahe hain. Hum gareeb log hain, humare pass itne paise nahi hain is ke ilaj ke liye. Doctor kehte hain ye theek ho sakti hai dawai se lekin humare pass us ke like bhi paise nahi hain. Hum ne aap ke bare main bohat suna hai ke aap gareeb or zarorat mandon ki madad karte hain meharbani kar ke humari bachi ko bacha lijiye.
(she is our daughter, doctors are saying that there is a hole in her heart and they are charging very high fees. We are poor people, we don't have much money for her treatment, doctors are saying, she can be cured with medication but we don't have money for that too. We heard a lot about you that you help poor and needy people please save our daughter, please.)

Neil looked at the baby who was just of few months. Neil got emotional to see her, his heart pinched to know that she is ill and he missed his baby. He had seen many dreams about his baby and his happy family but all broke in a single moment.

Man: agar aap hamari madad karenge to hum aap ke zindagi bhar bohat shukar guzar rahenge. (if you help us, we will be really thankful to you for the rest of our life.)

Lady requested Neil: Humari bachi ko bacha lijiye. (please save our daughter.)

Neil: aap dono please rona band kijiye, main kuch karta hun. (you both please stop crying, I am doing something.)

Neil takes out his phone from his pocket and called someone.

Neil: Sanjay, I am standing near room number 10, come here fast.

Neil cuts the call.

Neil: Aap log fikar mat kijiye, mujhse jo bam para main karunga. (don't worry, I will do what I can.)

Neil looked at the baby. He wanted to take the baby in his arms. He looked at it emotionally and smiled when the baby rubs her nose.

Neil: kya main isay utha sakta hun? (can I take her?)

The man nods and gives the baby to Neil. Neil caressed her hair and his eyes got tears. Neil kissed the forehead of the baby and the tear slides from his eyes. The couple looked at each other. Neil smiled fakely and wiped his eyes by turning his face. He squeezed his nose. The couple thought that he got emotional to hear their story.

Neil: aap ki beti bohat cute hai. Kya naam hai is ka? (your daughter is very cute. What is her name?)

Man: Muskan.

Neil: Muskan. Nice name.

They smiled. Neil gave the baby to the lady and smiled to see the baby.

Sanjay came.

Sanjay: Sir, you called me.

Neil: yes, Sanjay, this child has a hole in her chest and they can't afford her treatment. I will bear all the expenses of her treatment if we can treat her here in our hospital, make the bill in my name and if it is needed to concern some other cardiologist then also I will bear all the expenses. Just do tell me.

Sanjay nods.

Neil: I don't want ignorance in this matter. Got it.

Sanjay: yes, sir. 

Neil: Aap log in ke sath jaiye ye aap ki madad karenge aur ek minute. (you go with him, he will help you and one minute.)

Neil takes out his wallet and gave his card to the man.

Neil: agar aap ko kisi bhi kisam ki madad ki zarorat ho, mujhe ek call kar dijiyega ya aap yahan bhi aa sakte hain. (If you need any help, just make a call to me or you can come here too.)

The man and lady were thankful to Neil. The man joins hands in front of Neil.

Couple: shukriya. (Thank you.)

Neil: no need for it. (Is ki koi zarorat nahi hai.)

Neil caressed the hair of the baby who smiled. Neil smiled with teary eyes.

Lady: main aap ke aur aap ke parivaar ke liye dua karungi. Main dua karti hun ke aap ke bachon ko lambi umar mile aur wo aap ke sath hamesha khush rahen (I will pray for you and your family. I wish, your children get long life and live happily with you forever.)

Neil looked at her, he looked down and smiled. His heart was aching and getting heavy.  The couple goes. Neil turns and looked at them. Neil thinks and he looked at his empty hands. Neil got emotional.

Neil entered his cabin and kept his cell phone on the table and moved to a chair. Neil sits on the chair and was very tired though the day is just started but he was feeling low. Neil took a deep breath and leaned onto the chair. He thinks about his life and thinks about how happy was he, Avni and the whole Khanna family.

Neil: why did you leave us, bacha, why? Everything has changed. Everything is slipping from my hand like sand. Papa and Mamma's relationship, our happiness, our bond, everything. Papa is feeling so lonely. Why did you leave papa? Papa is missing you. Please come back to us. Papa doesn't have the courage now. Now, he is tired, he is tired.

Neil gulps. Neil closed his eyes and tear falls from his eye. Neil heard a baby calling him papa.

Baby: papa.

Neil instantly opened his eyes and sat. He looked around but no one was there. Neil cries and keeps his head in his arms and cries.

Neil: I miss you, my baby. Papa misses you.

Neil cries.

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