Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

A deep grief

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 108:

At night time, Avni and Neil were sleeping and Avni frowns in asleep. She wakes up and thinks. She was trying to process something. Avni got shocked. Avni tried to awake Neil by touching him because her voice was stuck in her throat. Avni tapped Neil's arm.

Avni: Na, Na, Na, Neil. Na, Neil.

Neil wakes up and turns his face to Avni. Neil switched on the light of the room and sat on the bed. He saw Avni laying by hugging her belly.

Neil: What happened, Avni?

Avni: Neil, our baby.

Neil was shocked. He felt something and was shocked. He pulled off the duvet and got a big shock.

Neil was driving the car at high speed. He wants to drive it as fast as he can. Neil looked at Avni who was unconscious. Neil keeps the hair strand behind her ear and speeds up the car. Neil looked at Avni then he focused on the road. Soon, they reached the hospital and Neil get down from the car, he had already informed the hospital so everything was arranged. The ward boys come with the stretcher. Neil goes to Avni's side.

Neil: bedsheet.

Ward boy shows that. Neil opened the car door and makes Avni lay on it. He covered her with the bedsheet and they took her inside. Neil was walking with the stretcher. They took her inside. The doctor came there.

Neil: Dr Rashmi, Avni.

Dr Rashmi: Relax Doctor Neil, I am going there.

She goes. Neil runs his hand in his hair and took a step back. He falls on the bench. Neil had an idea of what has happened but still, he doesn't want to admit that to him. Neil looked up with teary eyes.

Neil: God, please save my Avni and my child, please.

Neil closed his eyes.

After some time, Neil was standing by leaning on the wall and one foot was up. His eyes were closed, he was tired. He heard the sound of opening the door and looked there. He saw the doctor and instantly goes to her.

Neil: how are Avni and my child?

The doctor looked down. Neil was looking at her and waiting for her reply.

Doctor: Avni is fine.

Neil sighs.

Doctor: But,

Neil: but.

Doctor: But I am sorry, we could not be able to save your child. She has a miscarriage.

Neil felt like someone pulled the rug from under his feet. He was numb.

Doctor: I am sorry.

She looked down.

Doctor: Avni is unconscious but she will wake up in a few hours.

The doctor looked at Neil and goes.

A tear falls from Neil's eyes. He stumbles and falls near the bench. Neil was in shock. He was panting. Neil gasps and cries. Neil catches his hair and cries.

After some time, Neil wipes his tears and sighs. He got up and goes to the room. Neil goes inside and saw Avni. He sat near her and looked at her with teary eyes then he looked at her belly and raised his hand to touch it. Neil's hand was shaking, he was crying. Neil takes his hand back and cries.

Neil: I am sorry, my baby, I am sorry. I could not protect you, please forgive papa, please. Papa is bad, he could not save you.

Neil cries.

The sun rises and people started their work. Neil was sitting on the bench. He came out of his thoughts and looked around. Neil rubs his face with his hand and sighs. He got up and called Shweta who was standing on the balcony.

Shweta: Hello, Tillu where are you both. You did not come home till now.

Neil: Mom.

Shweta frowns.

Shweta: what happened, Tillu?

Neil: mom, we are in the hospital.

Shweta: hospital? But why? Is Avni alright?

Neil cries, and he suppressed his lips.

Neil: mom, my child. I lost my baby.

Shweta was shocked.

Soon, the Khanna family came there. Neil looked at them and his eyes gets moist. Everyone had tears in their eyes. Shweta touched Neil's arm.

Shweta: Tillu.

Neil hugged her and broke down.

Neil: mom, my child, mom.

Everyone was crying. Shweta caresses his hair and rubs his back. Bebe and Prakash were crying. Prakash sighs. Shweta breaks the hug and cups Neil's face.

Shweta: relax. Sshhh. Tillu, you are my strong boy if you cry like this then how can you handle Avni. Hmm.

Neil was looking at her. Prakash came to him and keeps his hand on Neil's shoulder. He hugs him. Neil cries. They break the hug.

Prakash: be strong now you have to become Avni's strength. Hmm.

Neil looked down.

Neil: she was already frightened. How will I tell her the truth? She will not handle that.

Bebe wipes her tears and came to him and touched his arm.

Bebe: that's why you have to become strong. You have to handle her. You have to become her strength. You have to be patient.

Neil was looking at her. Bebe nods. She hugs him. Neil got emotional.

On the other side, Avni stirs, she saw the flashes of her dream and of the night moment. She heard the sound of the baby who was calling mamma, mamma. Avni frowns and opened her eyes. She frowns to see the surroundings and realised she is in the hospital. The nurse saw her and came to her.

Nurse: you are awake. How are you now, ma'am?

Avni was looking at her.

The nurse came out and saw the Khanna family.

Nurse: doctor Neil, your wife is awake.

Neil was looking at her, the Khanna family looked at Neil. Shweta keeps the hand on Neil's shoulder. He looked at her, she sighed go. Neil was looking at her.

Neil: did you tell her about her...

Neil stopped.

The nurse shook her head. Neil thinks.

Avni was looking at the roof of the room and she heard the sound of opening the door but she did not look there. Neil entered the room and looked at Avni. He looked down and her and there. Neil sighs and came to Avni slowly. He smiled slightly. Neil caressed her hair and kissed her forehead.

Neil: how are you, Avni?

No response.

Neil: Avni?

No response. Neil was looking at her. He wondered why she is not saying anything, the Avni whom he knows, she would have bombarded the questions but why she is silent. Did she know the truth? Is she in trauma? Neil was looking at her.

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