Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Tension

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By magical_AditiRathore

Note: very disappointed with the response of both stories. Anyways, let's start the chapter.

Chapter 86:

At the time of the day, Avni entered the Mehta house fastly, Neil was behind her. They went upstairs and went to Aman's room. They saw Kareena is standing there outside the room and was worried. They go to her. Avni holds Kareena's arm.

Avni: Aman.

She signed at the door. Avni moved to the door and calms herself first. Avni slowly knocked on the door.

Avni: Aman. Aman, open the door, see, Di has reached. Come on, baby, open the door. You will not open your Di's door. Hmm.

Avni knocked on the door.

Avni: Aman.

Neil also joins her.

Neil: Aman, open the door. We can talk, everything will be fine.

No response.

Avni banged the door.

Avni: Aman, open the door.

Neil: Aman, Aman, open the door. Nothing has happened. Open the door.

Avni shouts Aman, are you not listening we are asking you to open the door.

Neil: Avni, relax. He is already stressed. Deal calmly.

Avni nods. She again requested Aman to open the room but no use.

Avni: Neil, I am feeling very scared what if Aman took any wrong step.

Neil thinks and asked Aman to open the door.

Neil: Avni, we have to break the door.

Avni nods and moved back.

Neil: Take aside.

Avni moved back. Neil kicked the door two times and it broke. Avni fastly goes inside and saw Aman is trying to cut his wrist. Avni, Neil and Kareena were shocked to see that.

Avneil: Aman.

They run to her and tried to stop him.

Avni: Aman, no, no, drop it.

Aman shook his head.

Avni and Neil looked at each other. Neil nods.

Avni: Aman, you are my brave brother, please drop it.

Aman: no, I am good for nothing. I have killed Riya Di.

Avni: no, Aman, nothing is like this.

Neil was looking at them. Neil catches Aman's arms from behind. Avni holds his wrist and snatched the knife from his hand and throws it on the floor. Neil left Aman and was panting. Avni slapped Aman.

Avni: I took the blame on my head to see this, this day. Did I hide the truth to see these things where my father is fighting for his life and my brother wants to kill himself. I got saved in an accident to see this day.

Avni sits on the bed and catches the bed and moves. Aman was crying. He comes to Avni and sits on his knees and keeps the hand on Avni's knees.

Aman: I am sorry, Di.

Avni cups his face.

Avni: whatever happened was an accident. But yes, your addiction to drugs was wrong.

Aman: sorry, Di, don't know, what happened to me? How I went on the wrong path but you Di, why did you take the blame on your head? Why did you bear all the humiliation, insults? Papa daily humiliates you, taunts you but you never reveal the truths. Why? To save me? To save me, you silently bear all the tortures.

Avni kissed his forehead.

Avni: you are my brother. You are my Aman, my cry baby, if I did not save you then who will do that, hmm. You are my Aman, my brother.

Aman: I am sorry, Di, I am sorry please forgive me.

Avni hugged him. Aman cries. Neil was looking at them. Neil knows Avni more than any other person in the world but he also doesn't understand what Avni is made of how can a person be so selfless.

Neil's phone rings. Avni and Aman looked at him.

Neil: hello.

Neil smiled.

Neil: thank you, thank you so much, Doctor Shiv.

Avni and Aman looked at each other and again looked at Neil they wipe their tears. Neil cuts the call and looked at them happily.

Neil: papa is out of danger now.

Avni smiled with teary eyes.

Neil: it was a call from the hospital. Papa is fine now.

Avni and Aman looked at each other and smiled they hugged each other. Avni cupped Aman's face.

Avni: let's go. Papa needs you.

Aman: he will hate me.

Avni: I am with you. I will handle everything. You just have to keep patience. Hmm.

Aman nods. Avni looked at Neil who was looking at her.

All reached the hospital and the view in front of them pulled the rug from under their feet. Neela maa was crying, Sonia and Shweta were consoling her. Sonia was also crying. A nurse comes out, Arnav tried to talk to her but she goes. Avni fastly goes to Neela maa she forgot that it is Neil's hospital, the nurse will tell him but Avni goes to Neela maa.

Avni: what happened?

Neil stopped the nurse.

Neil: what happened?

Nurse: he had another attack.

Neil was shocked.

Sonia: don't know, they are not telling anything. They just said that papa is critical.

Avni was shocked. She looked at Neela maa then at Neil who was coming to them and looking at Avni.

Avni: Neil...

Neil blinks his eyes.

Neil: doctors are trying. Relax.

Avni was looking at him. They wait for the doctor after some time, the doctor came. The doctor looked at Neil

Doctor: he is under observation, we can't say anything right now. Hope for the best.

Neil looked at him they went away from them and talked. When the doctor goes, Avni comes to Neil.

Avni: what he was saying?

Neil: nothing, just discussing papa's condition. Don't worry, everything will be fine. Come.

Neil and Avni go to all.

Neil: you all go, home. People are not allowed here.

Nm: I don't want to go.

Avni: I will stay with mamma.

Neil: try to understand, you can't gather the crowd here please go home when Papa will gain consciousness I will inform you.

Avni: Ne...

Neil: Avniii... Please.

Arnav: one can stay here, right. I will stay here.

Nm: me also.

Neil: ok, you two can stay here. Others please go.

They nod. The Khanna family meets the Mehta family. Prakash meets Arnav.

Prakash: if you need any help, don't hesitate to contact me, if you need anything, just do call me, I am like your father, hmm.

Arnar: thank you, uncle. You are with us in this hard time it is enough for us. It means a lot.

Prakash pets his shoulders and hugged him.

Nm: Arnav is saying right thank you so much for supporting us.

Shweta: no need of it we are one family if we will not come then who will come.

Shweta and Bebe meet her they go.

Avneil stayed there and went home at night. Avneil entered the home and were tired. Avni rubbed her forehead because it was aching. Neil huffs. Avni thinks. Neil looked at her and keeps the hand on her shoulder.

Neil: don't worry, everything will be fine.

Avni nods.

Neil: get freshen up and have something you did not eat anything since morning.

Avni: I don't want it.

Neil: Avni, how will this work. You will get ill. Will papa get fine by doing this?

Avni: Neil, I am not feeling good. Please. I knew this will happen that's why I would not want the truth to come out.

Neil: the thing that is supposed to happen that would have happened.

Avni turns to him.

Avni: no, we could hide it. I did not let anyone know about it in these five years but I broke down in front of you. I told you many times to not talk about it but you did not listen to me. See, what
happened.

Neil was shocked. He understands that she is tense and worried for Ashish and is saying all this because of that but it hurts him. Neela maa listened to them it is not his mistake. He wanted to see her happy.

Avni: if you remain silent then today everything would have been fine. you are responsible for all this. People say right, the secret is a secret until it is in your heart but the day, you share it with anyone, it will no longer be a secret.

Neil was looking at her.

Avni: I should not trust you. Telling you the truth was the biggest mistake of my life.

Neil said "Avni" in shock.

Avni looked at him and goes from there furiously. Neil was looking at her.







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