Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Surprise for Avni

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 72:

It was the time of the morning, Avni stirs and turns her face. She hides her face in the blanket but her alarm rings. She turns her face and off the alarm. Avni sits and her eyes were closed. Avni sets her hair and yawns. Avni opened her eyes while yawning and was surprised to see the room. It was filled with bouquets. Avni saw a tea set is kept on the table with a bouquet. Avni looked around and smiled to see it. She saw a Teddy on Neil's side on the pillow. Avni smiles and leans to pick it. A card was kept in his arms first, Avni pick the card then Teddy. Avni sits.

Avni read, good morning, my love and sorry.

Avni smiled. Avni looked at Teddy.

Avni: so cute.

Avni hugs Teddy. Avni gets up and goes to the table another card was kept there in a bouquet. Avni picks that.

Avni read, breakfast for my queen. A treat from a loving husband to his beautiful wife. I am sorry for my every deed that hurts you. If you forgive me then there is a gift for you on the couch, wear it. And I am sorry once again. Your Neil.

Avni smiles. She looks at the couch and saw a gift. Avni goes and picks the gift and sits. Avni opened the gift and saw a saree. Avni smiled and touched that. She saw the tea set. Avni looked around. She gets up.

Avni: Neil, Neil. Neil, come out.

Avni comes forward. Neil comes into the room he looks down. Avni smiles to see him. Neil comes to her.

Avni: what did you think that by seeing these things, my heart will melt. I will forgive you?

Neil looked at her. Avni was looking at him angrily.

Neil: no.

Avni: if you thought that then you were right.

Neil: no Avni, I...

Neil realized what Avni said. He looked at Avni who was smiling.

Neil: what did you say? You, you forgave me?

Avni moves a step to him. She cups his face.

Avni: I told you that day also that I am not angry with you. I am hurt. First, Mr Mehta lashed out at me without knowing the reason and after that, you also vent your anger on me though it was for me but still it hurts. You were right at your place and I was not angry with you. I was just processing what is happening where I went wrong.

Neil cups her face.

Neil: I am sorry, I also hurt you.

Avni: ok now leave this topic at least for now because I don't want to spoil my mood after this beautiful and cute surprise. We will talk about it later and will sort it. Right now enjoy this moment.

Neil smiles.

Neil: ok. Did you like my gift?

Avni: umm. Very much.

They smile.

Neil: then wear it.

Avni: ok, give me ten minutes.

Neil: ok.

Avni goes to pick the box then she goes. Neil smiles and keeps the hands in his pocket and sighs. He was happy that everything is sorted.

Avni took shower and looked at herself in the mirror and was nervous to go in front of Neil.


Avni: come on, Avni. He is your Neil so relax. Take a deep breath and go.

Avni took a deep breath and goes to the door. She again took a deep breath and opened the door. Avni comes out and saw Neil is not in the room.

Avni: where did he go?

Avni looked around.

Avni: but it is good now I can get ready. Avni, come on, get ready fast.

Avni goes to the dressing table and gets ready. Avni was about to go but she remembered something and goes to the bathroom.

Avni comes to the room and Neil also entered the room. He looked at Avni and the time stopped for him. Avni stopped to see Neil. Neil was lovingly looking at her and Avni was feeling butterflies in her stomach. Avni looked down and played with her ring. Neil moves to her. Avni saw that and her steps automatically moves back. They were moving and were looking at each other. Avni's back was about to hit the wall but Neil keeps his hand behind her head. Avni turns her face and saw the wall. Avni turns to Neil and their noses touched. Avni was trying to control her breath but couldn't be able to do that. Neil caged her in between his arms.

Avni: Ne, Neil, wh, what are you doing? Le, leave my way.

Neil: why? you are not liking it?

Avni looked at Neil who smiled.

Neil: you are looking breathtaking, wifey. I can't stop myself from admiring you.

Avni blushes.

Avni: Neil, someone will come.

Neil: no one will come because everyone knows that I planned a surprise for you so they will not come here.

Avni looked at him.

Neil: now if you are done with your questions so can I do my work?

Avni: work? Which work?

Neil moves closer to her.

Neil: loving you.

Avni: Ne, Ne...

Neil keeps the finger on her lips.

Neil: ssshhh...

Avni looked at him then at her lips and again at Neil. Neil cups her face and caresses her cheeks with his thumb. Avni closed her eyes. Neil caresses his cheek to her cheek. Avni clenched her fist. Neil looked at Avni and looked at her lips. He moved his thumb at her lips. Avni parted her lips. Neil was looking at her lips. Neil kissed her forehead. Avni opened her eyes when she realized that Neil is not doing anything. Neil smiled.

Neil: I told you that day that you will see a new Neil from tomorrow but unfortunately things did not go well but from now I promise, I will not let go a single chance from my hand. I will make you addicted to my love.

Avni smiles. She knew that he is waiting for her confession of love only after that he will proceed ahead. Neil holds Avni's hand and takes her to the couch. Neil served the flattened rice to Avni and poured the tea into the cups. Neil feeds Avni. Avni smiles and eats, she also feeds Neil and they had breakfast.

After that, Avni took her bag and kept her phone in it.

Neil: I am so sorry, Avni. I wanted to drop you office today. But dad has given his car for servicing so he will come with me.

Avni: it's ok, Neil.

Neil: I told you that I will drop you today.

Avni looked at him. She goes to him and encircles her arm around his neck. The bag was hanging at Avni's elbow.

Avni: don't be sad, Mr Khanna, oops sorry, Mr Gorrilla.

Neil makes a face. Avni smiled.

Avni: you can drop me some other day also.

Avni touched her nose with his nose and moves her head. Neil smiled.

Neil: ok.

Avni: bye.

Neil: bye.

Avni turns to go but she stopped. Neil was looking at her.

Avni: Neil, what is that?

Neil turns his face.

Neil: where?

Avni kissed Neil's cheek. Neil was stunned before he registered, Avni fastly goes from there. Neil turns his face and saw Avni going. Neil keeps the hand on his cheek and blushes. Neil bits his lower lip and ruffles his hair.

In the nighttime, Neil comes after changing his clothes, he was rubbing his hands. He frowns to see Avni who was laying on the bed by covering herself fully.

Neil: what happened?

Avni said in a shivering voice: it is so cold today.

Neil rubs his hands.

Neil: Actually.

He goes to his side and sat.

Neil: at least, give me the blanket to cover.

Avni: take out the other one. I am not going to share it.

Neil: Avni.

Avni: no Avni, go.

Neil forcefully tries to take the blanket.

Avni: Neil. Neil, don't do this.

Neil was trying to take that blanket.

Avni: Gorilla. Gorilla, stop. Gorilla.

Neil takes the blanket. Avni peeps from the blanket and turns her face.

Avni: what is this behaviour, Neil?

Neil lays. Avni lays straight and turns her face to him. She looked at Neil.

Neil: come here. You will feel good.

Avni looked at Neil. Neil signs come. He looked at Avni. She smiled and kept her head on Neil's chest. Neil captures her in his arms. Neil looked at Avni whose eyes were closed but Neil can't be able to see that. Neil lays his head back.

Neil: Avni?

Avni: hmm.

Neil: feeling better?

Avni: much better. Even cosy.

Neil smiled, he kissed her head. Avni smiles. She opens her eyes and thinks. Avni looked up at Neil who looked at her and understood that Avni wants to say something. They looked at each other.





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