Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Surprise

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 55:

In the daytime, the birds were flying in search of food. People were going to the hospital and some were coming out of it. Neil was getting ready for the surgery he wears the gloves then he wears the mask and looks himself in the mirror. Neil was tense because he is emotionally attached to Pari and she is a kid. Neil comes to the OT and saw Avni is sitting outside. Neil was surprised to see her. Neil pulls down the mask and comes to her. Avni smiles and gets up.

Neil: you here?

Avni: yes, today is a big day for you so I should be here.

Neil: and your work?

Avni: I have a capable team.

They smile.

Neil: Thanks.

Avni: I promised you, Neil, that I will make your strength in your hard time.

Neil smiles. The nurse comes with the papers.

Nurse: Doctor, who will sign these papers?

Neil: the orphanage owner is on the way. I talked to them they will sign it but don't trouble them for bills. You know what I mean.

Avni smiles. The nurse nods and goes.

Neil: you wait in my cabin. I send the coffee for you.

Avni: no need of. I had coffee just before coming here so relax. I came to meet Pari I want to make her feel that she is not alone but she is unconscious.

Neil: yaa, it is an effect of dose.

Avni nods. Neil covers his face with the mask and sighs heavily. Avni holds his hand, Neil looks at her.

Avni: You can do it. Believe yourself. Go and give your best and remember I am waiting for good news.

Neil smiles he holds Avni's hand in his hands and nods.

Neil: if you feel tired then go to my cabin. OK.

Avni: ok.

Neil goes. Avni prays. The operation started and Avni waits for it to end by sitting outside the OT. The staff offered her coffee and other things but she denied.

Neil was doing the operation and His hands start shaking and he feels the hand on his shoulder and saw Avni is standing there.

Avni: you can do it. I trust you and you should also trust yourself. Come on, do it.

Avni signs at Pari. Neil looks at her and again starts with a new spirit. Soon, the operation ends successfully. Neil turns and sees Avni is smiling she shows thumbs up and Neil smiles. Avni vanished and Neil was shocked.

On the other side, Avni was sitting on the bench she saw the red light is switched off. She gets up. Neil comes out he smiles to see her and hugs her in excitement. Avni smiles and hugs him back.

Neil: the operation is successful. Pari is out of danger.

Avni smiles. Neil breaks the hug and holds her shoulder.

Neil: I am so relieved. I can't explain my happiness in words.

Avni: Your smile is telling everything.

Neil smiles. Avni turns her face saw the nurse and other people. Neil follows her gaze and leaves her. They felt a little bit embarrassed. Neil rubs his nose.

Neil: ab you go to my cabin. I am coming.

Avni nods.

Later, Avni was sitting in Neil's cabin and Neil entered the room he sits and the door knocks.

Neil: come in.

The nurse comes.

Nurse: doctor, patient 34 has a panic attack he is out of control.

Neil: let's go. Avni, I am coming.

Avni nods. Neil goes.

Avni was waiting for Neil and was tired by sitting for 2 to 3 hours.

Avni: when I am this much tired then what would be the condition of Neil. His job is too tough and stressful.

The door is knocked and a man comes with a tray of the coffee cup and a note. The man keeps that on the table.

Man: Doctor Neil ordered it for you and gave this chit.

Avni smiles and nods.

Avni: thank you.

The man went from there. Avni opened the chit.

Avni reads I know you did not have anything. You must be tired. Have it, you will feel better.

Avni smiles. She picks the coffee and sips it.

Later, Neil entered the cabin and Avni is not there. He looks around but no one was there. He saw something is written on the notepad. Neil sits and picks that.

Neil Read, Sorry, I am going without informing you. I got a call from the office so I have to go and thanks for the coffee. Please have something and don't worry everything will be fine.

Neil smiles. Neil picks the phone to order something to eat.

The next day, Avni and Neil come into the ward to meet Pari. She was closing her eyes. Neil understands that she is acting.

Neil: no one is giving you medicine and injection so stop acting and open your eyes.

Avni was surprised. She looks at Pari.

Neil: see who came to meet you?

Pari opens her one eye. Avneil smile to see her. Pari opens her eyes.

Pari: who is she?

Avni smiles.

Neil: she is my wife, Avni. She came to meet you especially.

Avni: Hi Pari.

Pari: wife, means my Bhabhi.

Avni was surprised. Neil looks at her. He smiles and looks at Pari.

Neil: yes.

Pari: She is so pretty. I will call her angel.

Avni goes near her. Avni pulls her cheeks softly.

Avni: you are so cute.

Pari: thank you.

Avneil smiles.

Neil: now you take a rest. We are going.

Pari makes a face.

Avni: I will come back soon to meet you again.

Pari: promise?

Avni: promise.

Pari: no one comes to meet me. Everyone promised but no one come.

Avni and Neil feel bad. Avni had tears in her eyes. She kissed her forehead.

Avni: but I will surely come back and will get many toys for you.

Avni looks around.

Avni: where is the gift?

Avni looks around.

Avni: I guessed, I left that in Neil's cabin. I bought fruits for you and next time, I will buy toys and chocolate but promise me, you will have medicine on time and listen to everyone.

Pari: promise.

Avni and Neil smile.

Avni: bye.

Pari: bye.

Avni kissed her hand and goes.

Avni and Neil come out.

Neil: Pari is really happy to meet you. You inspired her.

Avni said while smiling: she is really cute.

Neil smiles.

Avni: now, I should leave. I have a meeting.

Neil: ok.

Avni goes.

Two days passed like this and again Avni got busy with her work because of the new project even she came home late these two days. Avni was working on the laptop and heard the knock on the door. Avni permits the person to come inside by looking at the laptop. It was Neil he was missing her so he came to meet her. Neil saw she is busy he smiles and comes to the table. Neil clears the throat.

Avni: keep the file here. I will check it.

Neil chuckled silently.

Neil: ok ma'am as you wish. Can I go now?

Avni: yes.

Neil smiles with a frown. Neil smiles silently and his eyes were closed. Avni recognised the voice and looks up. She saw Neil and gets surprised.

Avni: Neil, you?

Neil: yes madam. Can I go?

Avni smiles.

Avni: sorry I was busy with work.

Neil: it's ok.

Avni: please sit.

Neil sits.

Neil: today, I was free so thought to give you a surprise but seems like you are really busy.

Avni: yes, I told you about Jaipur so I am researching their traditions and rituals so that I can do the arrangements accordingly.

Neil nods by pressing his lips.

Avni: and I am quite impressed with their traditions. I am liking it.

Neil smiles. Avni's phone rings she saw the caller I'd. Neil saw the number. Avni cuts it.

Neil: why did you cut it?

Avni: nothing, it is a wrong number. Calling since morning.

Neil felt Avni is hiding something.

Avni: ok, leave it and let's go. Here is a restaurant I like their food let's go and have lunch.

Neil: why? There is no canteen in your office?

Avni: it is here but I don't want to get embarrassed like that day plus I need a change badly so let's go.

Neil smiles.

Neil: ok.

Avni picks the receiver of the phone.

Avni: I am going out and will come in one and a half hours. Ok.

Avni cuts the call.

Avni: let's go.

Neil: ok.

They get up. Avni gets her bag and they go.

Avneil were enjoying the lunch while talking but the call was disturbing them again and again. The phone rings and again. Avni looks at Neil and cuts it but it rings again.

Neil: give it to me I see him.

Avni hesitates.

Avni: ab aa, leave it why you are spoiling your mood because of these useless people.

Neil frowns and Avni cuts the call and switched off her phone she keeps it in her back.

Avni: now no one will disturb us. You continue.

Avni looks at her plate and stirs the spoon she eats the bit and Neil was looking at her. Avni looks at him and avoids eye contact. Neil thinks.









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