Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Engagement

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 29:

A venue was set with curtains and the function was in the daytime so there was no lightning. It was decorated with curtains and flowers and was giving a decent look just like Avni and Neil likes. The theme was sky blue colour and white and flowers were also of that colours.

The Khanna family came there and Neil was wearing blue Sherwani he was impressed with the theme even the Khanna family liked it but one person made a face.

Maddy: how cheap?

Neil looks at her.

Maddy: Avni herself is an event planner and her engagement theme is so cheap and down class. Mehta's are so stingy.

Neil: stingy?

All look at Neil.

Neil: sorry to say bua but this theme is not low class. It is decent and classic and I and Avni choose this theme as we wanted a decent theme that looks good. And you know me I like simple things, not glittering. And about stingy then we and Mehta's had decided that we would share whatever the cost would be so there is no point in saying all these things because we are not stingy.

Maddy: did you see, Bebe? How he is talking to me? They didn't get married yet and Avni made him away from us.

Neil gives her are you serious look.

Maddy: that day is not away when she will take him away from all of us and we will just see that. Mark my words.

Shweta: but Maddy Jiji, you were the one who wanted Avni and Neil's marriage and now you are saying this all. Isn't it strange?

Maddy had no reply.

Shweta: and this all is happening because of you, you forced them to marry and now when they are happy with this alliance then you are trying to create a wall between them, trying to ignite the fire between them.

Neil closes his eyes and grins his teeth as things were going out of control.

Maddy: you mean to say I am the enemy of my nephew's happiness.

Shweta: I didn't say that. Your acts are saying this and about Avni's taking Neil away from us then she is not like that and if by chance it happens then you will be responsible for that because all this is happening because of you.

Maddy was about to reply.

Bebe: enough, now no more argument. Today is Neil's engagement and you both are fighting what if anyone heard us, what if Mehta's heard us what they will think? And you, Maddy, Mehta's are Kareena's in-laws, respect them. Relations are made by respect and love if you try to keep them under your feet then only you will fall when it slips from under your feet. Mark my words.

Maddy looks down. Neil saw some guests are coming.

Neil: Bebe.

Neil sighs. They smile and goes to welcome them.

Late, Mehta's come there and both families greet each other.

Bebe: where is Avni?

Neela maa: She is coming with Sonia.

Bebe nods.

Bebe: go Neil and get your bride.

Neil looks down and smiles. All smiles.

Shweta: go.

Neil nods and goes. When Neil came outside he looks for Avni he hears the sound of bangles he turns and didn't saw anyone there was a turning and he saw someone is coming he looks up and lost to see Avni.


Sonia was with Avni and the time stopped for Neil. Avni looks at him then she looks down because she was feeling butterflies in stomach. They came to Neil.

Sonia: hi Neil.

No reply. Sonia smiles and snaps in front of his eyes. Neil came back to reality.

Neil: han.

Sonia: I said, hi.

Neil: h, hi.

Sonia: where are you lost? In our girl?

Neil gets embarrassed. Avni was playing with her ring.

Arnav comes there and Calls Sonia she goes.

Neil: looking beautiful.

Avni: thank you.

Neil smiles.

Sonia comes.

Sonia: can we go?

Neil: yaa, let's go.

Avni and Neil entered together and all claps for them. They went to the family and took blessings. Then they went to the stage. Neil asked for Avni's hand and helps her to get on the stage. Guests were coming to meet them. Ali comes there.

Ali: sorry, sorry, I am late.

Avni: what is this Ali? Is this the time to come?

Ali: sorry. Was busy with a client.

Avni sighs. Ali side hugs her and congratulates her. Neil looks away.

Ali forwards the hand to Neil who turns to him.

Ali: congratulations.

Neil shakes his hand with him and said, thank you.

Ali: you are very lucky, you got a diamond please take care of her.

Neil: don't worry I will treat her like Queen.

Avni looks at him and can feel that Neil doesn't like Ali but why she doesn't know she thought maybe that is because of Gol gappa competition. Avni was trying to read Neil's eyes and can see jealousy but why? She has no idea.

Later, Avneil exchanged the rings.

Neil's ring.


Avni's ring.

All claps for them and comes to congratulates them. After that, they cut the cake and feed each other. All were happy. Neela maa and Shweta pray for their happy life. Arnav wipes his tears and Avni saw that she gets emotional but Arnav signalled her smile. Avni smiles. Neil saw that and keeps the hand on Avni's shoulder.

Neil: they are your family and after the marriage also will be your family even our family.

Avni smiles but she thinks something.

Bebe: there must be some dance what say?

Prakash: yes.

All dances and Avneil were clapping for them by sitting on the couch. Aman and Kareena took them there and they danced. Prakash and Avni dance he turns her and the hands separate, Avni landed in Avni's arm. Their eye locks.

Aman: a perfect place.

Avneil looks at him and gets separated.

Arnav whispers in his ear: control your tongue tomorrow we will go back and Avni will take revenge of each and every word so play smartly.

Aman gaps. Arnav taps his shoulders.

Bebe: I am feeling something is missing.

Shweta: what?

Neela maa: Avni and Neil's dance.

Avneil looks at her then at each other.

Shweta: correct. Today is their engagement so they must dance on a romantics song and drove in the eyes on each other and.

Bebe: enough. Enough we don't want to hear your commentary so stop.

All smiles.

Shweta: ok.

Nm: come on, Neil, Avni what are you waiting for?

Shweta: for the song.

Nm: Aman.

Aman nods.

Song: Dil mera puch raha hai tujhse.

Avneil dances but there was a gap between them they were looking here and there. Avni smiles to see Ali and Neil saw that when Neil turns his face there he gets jealous to see Ali and looks away. Neil moves away, Avni looks at him he holds her hands and then he turns her now her back was touching Neil's chest and she feels a shiver in her body. She can feel Neil's breath near her ear. Neil's nose touched her ear and she closes her eyes. Neil also feels the shiver in his body. Soon the song ends and all claps. Avneil gets separated and Neil was feeling awkward on his act. Neil looks at Avni who was looking away she feels his gaze and turns to him. Neil looks away. Family comes to them and appreciates their dance.

In the nighttime, Avneil were sitting on the bed in their respective room and looking at their ring. Neil smiles but Avni things.

Avni: am I doing, right?

Avni thinks.

The next day, they came back to their home. Like this one week past and the Khanna family decided to talk to Mehta's about the functions and venue. So, Mehta's invite them for dinner. Where all were sitting except Neil who went to the hospital and said he will come there later. Neil came there.

Shweta: here he comes.

Neil smiles and takes the blessing from elders and meets Arnav and Aman. Avneil looks at each other and smiles. Avni was feeling that something bad is going to happen she was strongly feeling that.

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