Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

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Chapter 27:

It was the time of the morning and the beach was looking beautiful. Everyone was present there and Neil was standing at the side and waiting for Avni. He did not sleep well in the last night as Avni and Ali's talks were roaming in his mind and they did not talk about yesterday's incident even didn't get the alone time as first they were angry with each other and later Ali was with them.

Neil looks at the side from where Avni can come. Neil looks around and again looks for Avni. She comes there by wearing a full-length frock.

Neil was lost to see her she was trying to make her hair strand behind the ear. Neil smiles to see her and feels happy that Avni values his choice and understood his point. Neil is not a narrow-minded person but he is possessive about his closeone relations he can do anything for them. Avni looks at him and they smile to see each other. They decided in their mind that they will not talk about yesterday's incident.

Neil comes to the area where all were sitting and breakfast was arranged there and Avni was standing there.

Bebe: Avni, looking beautiful.

Avni looks at Neil who was looking at her.

Avni: thank you, Bebe. This dress is much comfortable according to this place.

Neil smiles.

Avni looks at him.

Avni: thanks to the person who made me realize that.

Neil smiles and looks down. Neil take out his phone and typed something. Avni's phone beeps. She saw Neil's message and looks at Neil.

Avni reads in her mind: thank you for understanding my point. I really don't have any problem with your wearing but I lost my calm yesterday and behaved like that. Anyways, looking beautiful and thank you for considering my wish. It means a lot.

Avni smiles and looks at Neil who blinks his eyes. They smile.

Neil sighs happily that all sorted easily and thanks to Avni who made that easy by understanding his point but Neil's happiness was of just a few seconds soon Ali comes there and stands by keeping his arms around Avni's and Aman's shoulder. Neil gets jealous.

Ali: so all reached?

Aman: yes let's start the breakfast.

All: sure.

Avni and Ali sit together and Neil on the opposite side. Everyone saw that but can't say anything and remain silent. Everyone was having breakfast but Neil's eyes were on Avni and Ali he looks at his plate then at Avni and Ali. Ali eats from Avni's plate she looks at Khanna family who did not react and looks normal. Avni looks at Neil who instantly looks at his plate and stirs his phone. Avni thinks but did not stop Ali.

Later, all the youngsters were standing near the beach and talking and clicking pictures. Neil looks at Avni who was standing with Ali.

Neil: ab, Avni.

Avni looks at him, Neil signs to come aside.

Avni: ab, Ali, I am coming.

Ali: yaa, yaa.

Avni goes with Neil and they stand at the distance.

Avni: what happened?

Neil: wo, Actually, I was thinking that why don't we go to buy a ring today.

Avni was looking at him.

Neil: I mean, you forgot the ring at your home so we have to go there so I was thinking that we go today if, if you don't mind.

Avni: ab Neil. Actually, Ali wanted to go shopping and I promised him that I will help him with the shopping so I am going with him.

Neil gets hurt which was clearly visible on his face.

Neil: oh.

Neil looks down.

Avni: but we trio can go together. I will help Ali with shopping then we will select your ring.

Neil: no, it's ok you go with him. I don't want to come between friends. Enjoy.

Neil smiles and turns to go.

Avni: what is there to enjoy even I am thinking that we all should go so that we can enjoy.

Neil smiles.

Neil: you all go.

Neil goes. Avni frowns and thinks.

Later, Neil was sitting with family and other youngsters were enjoying. Aman comes there.

Aman: Jiju, all are calling you there. Come.

Neil looks there and nods. They went there. Neil frowns because of the sun.

Ali: ok, Neil. Avni is saying that she wants to go with you to buy a ring and I want her to come with me today and will go with you tomorrow. Still, you both have two days.

Neil: if she wants to go. I have no problem. I asked her to go and I have her ring. We were going to buy my ring so I can go with someone else because of the size issue else anyone can buy it.

Avni was looking at him.

Ali: see, he has no issue.

Avni: but I want to go. I forgot his ring at home so I have to go with him and I am thinking to buy a matching ring.

Neil and their family smile.

Ali: o my, my. Since when you start thinking like this.

Aman: since when her alliance had fixed.

Avni glared at him and Neil smiles he looks at Avni.

Ali: ok then let's do a competition, the man who wins, Avni will go with him.

Avni frowns. All were confused.

Sonia: competition?

Neil: Ali, Avni is not a thing that will be won by competition.

Avni looks at him and smiles.

Ali: relax man, I am just asking about going with her. The one who will eat more gol gappay, Avni will go with him.

Ali looks at Avni and Neil.

Ali: agreed?

Neil was about to say.

Avni: Ali, have you gone mad?

Aman: di, let's them do it. It will be fun.

Neil: no, I am not going to do it.

Ali: afraid? You know you will lose, right?

Neil: I don't like to eat unhygienic or junk food. I am a doctor and I know these things are not good for health.

Ali: stop making lame excuses and accept your defeat.

Neil gets angry.

Avni: Ali?

Neil: I am in.

Ali smirked and looked at Aman who shows thumbs up.

Avni: Neil, you don't need to do this.

Neil: I will do, Avni.

Avni looks at him.

Neil and Ali were sitting and two plates were kept there.

Avni: I am still saying, don't do this.

Ali: Avni, don't be a spoiling spot

Avni looks at him.

Aman: ok so ready.

Neil and Ali nod.

Aman: ok 1, 2, 3. Go.

They start eating and one after one they eat three plates and forth was there. Neil coughs. Avni looks at him she rubs his back.

Avni: you ok?

Neil was coughing. Avni takes the plate away.

Avni: stop this madness. Bhai, water.

Arnav nods and goes. Avni was rubbing Neil's back whose condition was bad.

Avni: what was the need to eat? I told you to not eat but you never listen to me.

Ali was looking at Avni he looks at Neil then at Avni. Arnav comes and Avni makes Neil drink water.

Avni: you ok?

Neil nods. Avni signs then she gets angry.

Avni: I am not going anywhere with anyone. You go and do your shopping, your own and you, Neil, go and buy your ring. You both made fun of me a lot now not anymore.

Avni goes and Neil was looking at her he looks at Ali.

Ali: Avni, Avni, listen we were just kidding. Avni.

Neil was looking at him and thinks.

At the night, Neil was sitting in his room.

Neil: Avni, why you are angry with me? I refused to play first but he provoked me, What is my fault in it? I don't even think of making fun of you.

Neil thinks. He hears the knock on the door and goes to open it. When Neil opened the door he was shocked to see the person.









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