Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Journey last part

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 22:

A bus had shown which was going to its destiny. On the bus, everyone was busy in their talks. Avni was feeling tired as first she went to the office then a phone call and travel she yawns and rest her head to the seat and closes her eyes. Neil looks at her and smiles. Arav was telling his stories. Neil turns to him and was listening to him. Avni tried to adjust her head and after some attempts, she slept and slowly her head falls on Neil's shoulder. Neil turns to her and was surprised to see her face close to his face. Neil's break stopped and he was looking at Avni, her hairs come on her face and Neil slowly and carefully takes them behind her ear and smiles.

Neil in mind: you look more cute in sleep, at least you don't fight with me.

Neil smiles and rest his head to the seat and looks outside.

Later.

Aman: we are feeling bored let's play something.

Arav shouts: yeah.

Neil turns to him and keeps the finger on his lips.

Neil: ssshhhh! Bua is sleeping.

Arav keeps the finger on his lips but Avni wakes up she saw that she is laying her head on Neil's shoulder she looks up and Neil turns to her. Their eyelock, their faces were closed and they can feel the breath of each other. Neil looks at Avni's parted lips and feels attracted to them. Neil looks into the eyes of Avni then at her lips and again into her eyes like he was finding the answer to something.

All shouts: yes.

Avneil flinched and came back to reality. Avni moves away and keeps the hair strand behind her ear because of embarrassment. Avni and Neil were feeling awkward. Neil rubs his nose.

Avni: ab, I, I, I am sorry. I don't know how I.

Neil looks at her.

Neil: it's ok you have the right.

Avni looks at him Neil smiles.

Shweta: let's start.

Neil: What?

Shweta: game.

Neil: oh.

Aman comes to the centre. Shweta and Neela maa were standing on the seat on her knees and looking back at all.

Aman: so, we will play the music on the cell phone and pass this ball and the music stopped on the person he will sing a song.

Avni: please you all play. I am tired.

Aman: what Di?

Bebe: no excuses. Everyone has to play.

Avni remains silent.

Aman: thank you, Bebe.

Neil: but it is difficult to pass the ball because of seats.

Shweta: actually.

Arnav: yaa, that's the problem.

Avni: yes, so game cancel.

All shouts: no. (Except Neil.)

Avni flinched and keeps the hand on her ear.

Neil whispers: what's the problem in playing the game?

Avni whispers: I have no problem but your brain is dried because of studies, Dr, Gorilla. Can't you understand why we are going on the trip?

Neil: for the holidays.

Avni imitates him.

Avni: for the holidays. No.

Neil looks at her.

Avni: I am sure they plan to make us come close and there also they will try that in everything. Didn't you see, how all sits and fills the vacant seats so we can sit together.

Neil thinks.

Neil: oh, now I understand.

Avni: thank God.

Shweta: what are you both whispering?

Avneil looks at them.

Neil: ab, aa nothing.

Nm: understand Shweta Ji, personal talks. Privacy. Right?

Avneil feels awkward. Avni looks outside. Neil also looks outside to hide his awkwardness.

Shweta: oh yes. Tillu.

Neil: yes.

Avni smiles. Neil looks at her. Avni suppresses her lips.

Neil: Mom, please.

Shweta: what? Never minds. And tells me, did you show the engagement ring to Avni.

Avni looks at her.

Neil: no.

Shweta: whys?

Neil: that is in my bag. I will show her when we reached.

Shweta: uff this boy?

Neela maa was looking at Shweta she was confused that when Shweta came to the home and when they first time met, Shweta was speaking well even in the morning then suddenly what happened?

Bebe looks at her and understands. She smiled as she knew what Neela maa is thinking.

Nm: Avni, where is Neil's ring?

Avni: I don't know.

Nm: what? I gave you that.

Avni: when?

Nm: last night and told you it is Neil's ring, keep it in your bag.

Avni thinks. Neil looks at her.

Avni: that was Neil's ring. I thought you are saying to keep it in the locker so I kept that there.

Neela maa and Shweta shouts: what?

Bebe palms her head.

Bebe: ho gaya siyapa.

Nm: how could you, Avni? I told you it is Neil's ring and keep it in the bag as my bag was full of other things and it does not get lost that's why I gave that to you.

Avni: I am sorry. Actually, earphone was in my ear and I was talking to the client so I didn't understand.

Neela maa looks at her.

Avni: sorry.

Neil: it's ok, Neela maa. We will buy it there.

Avni looks at him to hear Neela maa.

Nm: but I bought that after showing you the design.

Neil: It's ok.

Avni was looking at Neil. Neela maa sits as her mood gets spoil. Neil looks at Avni.

Neil: what happened?

Avni: what you said?

Neil: it's ok.

Avni: no, what you called, mamma?

Neil: Neela maa, why?

Avni was looking at him.

Neil: as my parents are your parents just like that your parents are my parents. If a girl has to accept the relation of a boy then it applies to boy also, no?

Avni was just looking at him. Neil smiles. Neil snaps his fingers in front of her eyes. Avni came back to reality.

Neil: what happened? Where are you lost?

Avni looks down and smiles.

Neil: what? Why are you smiling? Did I say wrong?

Avni shook her head.

Avni: nothing. By the way, you are not bad, Mr Gorilla.

Neil: Thanks for the compliment soon to be Mrs Gorilla.

Avni looks at him. Neil smiles Avni also smiles.

Soon, they reached the destination where Avni looks at the place and smiles. It was a resort.

Sonia: it's so beautiful.

Avni: yaa.

Neil smiles to see her.

They went to their rooms. Avni was going and Neil was behind her. Avni was about to enter the room she saw that Neil stopped in front of the room which is next to her room. Neil looks at her then at the door of his room. They look at each other and understands that it is the family's planning. Avni goes to her room.

Neil thinks.

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