Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Neil and Avni's deal
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Discussion

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Chapter 12:

It was the time of the night, the party ends and Mehta family decides to leave.

Ashish: ok Mr Khanna now we take your leave it was so good to meet you all today.

Prakash: same here and thank you so much Avni for coming we know how busy you are, still you managed to come it means a lot.

Avni: no uncle please don't sat thank you in fact, thank you for inviting me.

Neil smiles as he knew that she did not want to come because of Maddy but he does not know that because of him, what happened in Mehta house.

Ashish: ok then, bye.

Prakash: yes but will meet soon.

Ashish: off course.

Ashish signs go.

Avni: ab Arav, will you come with Bua?

Arav gets excited.

Arav: yes, yes.

All laughs.

Sonia: Avni, no ice cream or chocolates.

Avni: ok.

Arav gets sad and looks down.

Avni: Arav, come.

Arav goes to her she holds his hand and squeezes her eyes he understands and gets happy. Neil was looking at them he smiles to see them.

Sonia: Avni!

Avni looks at her.

Avni: what bhabhi, I did nothing.

Sonia shook her head.

Avni: ok so we are going. Bye everyone and bye uncle, aunty, Bebe it was so nice to meet you all.

Neil stretches his neck, but Avni ignores him.

Avni: bye Kareena.

Neil looks at her.

Kareena: bye.

Avni goes with Arav and Mehta family also goes.

Maddy: how rude that Avni is? She didn't even look at me.

Shweta murmurs: who wanted to see you?

Neil looks at his mother.

Maddy: bhabhi, did you say something?

Shweta looks at her.

Shweta: me? No, nothing. I did not say anything.

Bebe: Maddy, I don't understand why people also behave rudely with you.

Maddy: because there are jealous of me and that Avni, she is so ill-mannered.

Bebe: but she was so nice to us, in fact, we really liked her what we heard about her she is pretty much good than that.

Maddy gets angry.

Neil thinks.

Neil: excuse me, I have some work. I am just coming.

Bebe: where are you going?

Neil: to make an important call?

All nods. He goes outside to the parking area and saw Avni is about to get in her car.

Neil: Avni!

Avni stops, Mehta family also stopped near their car but they were away from them and looking at them. Avni looks at him she looks away and makes a face she leans to the car.

Avni: Arav, don't come out. I am just coming, ok.

Arav nods. Avni gave him a video game which Sonia gave her. Avni shuts the door and locks the car she goes to Neil who was coming to her. Avni looks back to Arav then at Neil.

Avni: what happened, now?

Neil: ab, I wanted to talk about Aman and Kareena.

Avni: what you want to take now we talked at the party.

Neil: I know, I want to ask that, is it the right time to do that?

Avni: I don't think so they should wait for some time but as we know that they are waiting for a year so they will not listen now and it is their last year of college after it, Aman will join business so I think we have to convince them to wait some time for marriage.

Neil: what you said?

Avni: I said we have to convince them to wait some time for marriage.

Neil: we? But you said earlier that say you and me... we can not be us, remember?

Avni: you came here to taunt me?

Neil smiles.

Neil: just kidding.

Avni looks away.

Neil: you are right, they should wait for one year at least, right now they have to focus on their studies and career.

Avni: right.

Neil: but will they listen to us?

Avni: no, and if we impose our decision on them then they can take some wrong move so, we have to think something that they will agree to marry after one year.

Neil: like?

Avni: like... yes, first, we talk to the family what they think about it if they have no objection then we will do the engagement that will give them security and they will listen to us also and in this one year we will have an eye on them that they are serious about it or it is just an attraction.

Neil nods.

Neil: yaa that's a good idea and breaking engagement is much better than breaking a marriage relationship.

Avni: yes.

Neil: ok then I will try to talk to Bua.

Avni: all the best.

Neil smiles.

Neil: she is not that bad.

Avni: yaa, yaa she is an example of goodness.

Neil looks at her.

Avni: ok bye now. I have to go. Arav is waiting for me.

Neil: ok, good night.

Avni: good night.

Avni turns and starts walking. Neil was looking at her she gets in the car and passes by Neil he was looking at her. Neil thinks.

Neil: before Bua, I should talk to Bebe and mom, dad.

Neil thinks.

Later, Avni was laying on the bed in her room and thinking about Aman and Kareena. Avni sits.

Avni: how will I talk to papa after what happened last night? I should not shout at him whatever he is saying and feeling it is because of me. I showed that to him, I choose this path then why I get impulsive.

Avni thinks.

Avni: I know that I showed all that I am responsible for that accident but one truth is there that it was an accident then why he can't forgive me? Why?

Avni closes her eyes and saw blur images of that accident that someone holds the steering wheel and the car lost its balance, a truck was coming from the opposite side and to save them, Avni turns the car and it hits the tree.

Avni opens her eyes and breathes heavily she wipes her sweats.

On the other side, Neil was sitting in his room and seeing the pictures of the party on his cell phone he saw Avni in one picture and zoom that side. Neil smiles.

Neil: hmm, so miss Avni, no, not Avni you called me gorilla, right? so you, you, umm... yes, you are lady don, always talk to me like Don.

Neil smiles.

Neil: but I must say you are very smart, a beauty with a brain.

Neil smiles and stops.

Neil: beauty with a brain? Neil, what happened to you? You were also staring at her at the party. Did I.

Neil widens his eyes.

Neil: no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. Neil, what are you thinking nothing is like that and if she gets to know about that I am thinking this then she will press my neck. Neil, you are tired, you need rest, stop thinking useless things and sleep.

Neil placed the phone on the bed and lays by covering him with a duvet and closes his eyes But, sleep was far away from Avni's eyes she was thinking about how she will face Ashish.

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