Unshed Tears

By magical_AditiRathore

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Unshed tears is a story of a girl who had some past which she hid from her family, all thought she was respon... More

Prologue
Introduction of Character
Avni and Neil's trouble
Avni's pain
Avni's dream
Avneil meet again
Hope
Shades of Life
Avni's pain
Party
Shock
Avni's anger
Discussion
One more meeting
Alliance
Neil's anger and Avni's problem
Secret
Alliance part 01
Alliance last part
Surprise or shock
Situation
Journey part 01
Journey last part
AvNeil journey
Naughty Avni
Feelings
Peak of anger
Competition
Ice cream date
Engagement
Where Avni went
The truth come out
Revelation of truth part 01
Revelation of truth part two
Revelation of truth final part
Neil's fear
Avni's condition
Worse condition
Heart broken
Avni's pain
Marriage functions
Memories
Avneil's wedding
AvNeil first night
First day
Avneil first fight after marriage
Patch up or new turn
Neil's happiness
Neil Shares his feeling
Announcement
Pool of Emotions
Poor Neil
Honeymoon part 01
Honeymoon last part
Avneil cute moment
Tough time
Surprise
Argument
Talks
Attack on Avni
Detective Neil
Realization
One more attack
Avni's feeling
High voltage drama
Love or Blunder
Sorting the things
New problem
Accusation
Avni's decision
Avni's big decision
Distances
Bundle of emotions
Surprise for Avni
Closeness
Confession part 01
Confession part 02
Teaser
Wedding function
Avneil's hidden pain
One more shock for Avneil
Disclosure of truth
Neil's point of view
Blissful night
Sentiments
Emotional roller coaster ride
Truth came out
Suffering
Tension
Guilt
Fix up everything
Supportive Neil
Mending the relationship
Charming moments of Avneil
Craving
Recalling the past
Avneil and the family
Anniversary part 01
Anniversary part 02
Teaser
Anniversary last part
Misunderstanding part 01
Midunderstanding part 02
Misunderstanding last part
Khanna ladies
Avneil's big argument
Cold behaviour
Surprising news
Avneil's joy
Nightmare or signal
Heartache
A deep grief
Toughest phase of life
Where is Avni
Neil's unbearable pain
Neil recalls past part 01
Neil recalls past final part
Avni came home
Avni's suffering
Clash between Avneil
Dispute between Avneil part 1
Dispute between Avneil last part
End or new beginning
A new drama
Shield of Avni
Cute Neilu
Neil on mission part 01
Neil on mission part 02
Note
Ladydon
Wifey's surprise
Wifey's surprise part 02
Love and Storm
Storm of love
Planning
Hubby's surprise for Wifey
Teaser
Twist
Good news or bad news part 01
Good news or bad news part 02
Good news or bad news last part
One more storm to hit
Avneil's difficulty
Great wall of Khanna family
Stole some moments
Avneil's understanding
Naughty Avni
Avni in danger
Baby's life
Lion's roar
Neil's roar
Neil's fear and Avni's condition
Baby's life and news
Time flies
Cute Avneil
Life or Death
New life or the end
Do and Die situation
New member or tragedy
Avni's life
Sad Avni
Neil's condition for Avni
Avni met her baby
Avni's childish behaviour
Avni was upset
Avneil and Neav came home
Welcomes new member
Avni's behaviour
Neav's tantrums
Showering love on baby
Neav's naming ceremony day
Closing the book

Neil and Avni's deal

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By magical_AditiRathore

Chapter 05:

It was a time of day, Avni was looking at Neil shockingly, angrily and what not except the love. Neil was looking at Avni with a smile on his face. Neil comes to Avni who gets up.

Neil forwards his hand: hi, Neil Khanna.

Avni was looking at Neil then she looks at Neil's hand and again looks at Neil. Neil frowns and looks at his hand then at Avni. Avni composes herself as she is never mixed professional and personal life. Avni shakes her hand with Neil.

Avni: hi, Avni Mehta.

Neil smiles.

Neil: Nice to meet you. Please have a sit.

Avni nods she sat she was sitting on a single couch and Neil sits on the couch and Kareena and Maddy also sit with him.

Neil: so, can we start?

Avni: sure sir. So.

Avni shows the designs and briefs him about them. Neil was also listening carefully.

Neil: hmm, the designs are really impressive but I like that one. One minute.

Neil shows her the design.

Neil: this one.

Avni nods.

Maddy: Neil, are you mad?

Avni and Neil look at Maddy.

Maddy: This design is so cheap.

Avni gets angry and Neil looks at her.

Neil: bua, this is the best when you will see it in real you will surely like it. It is classy and Kareena wanted the Princess theme so it perfectly goes to that.

Maddy: classy? What's wrong with you, Neil? How can your choice be so down market? You don't know these planners they just need money and the quality of services are cheap and this sunshine event planner they have only name their work is third class. All event planners are the same, charge high prices and services are so low class.

Kareena was looking at her.

Neil: bua, please.

Avni: Ma'am if you don't like our work then it's ok but no one has the right to raise finger on our credibility. The whole city knows about us and our excellence. We believe in quality, not quantity if our services were cheap or poor then we would not have on the first, people talked about us and, by hearing and seeing our work you came to us not we.

Neil was looking at her. Avni picks her stuff and gets up. Kareena was worried and Neil don't know what to say.

Avni: now we don't want to work with you and I will make sure that we will not work with you in the future also.

Neil shocked.

Kareena: ma'am, ma'am, ma'am.

Avni: I am sorry, sweety but I don't like to work with double standard people. Really sorry.

Avni went and Kareena was trying to stop her but no use. Kareena looks at Maddy.

Kareena: I hate you, mamma.

Maddy shocked. Kareen runs to the stairs. Neil looks at her.

Neil: Kareena.

Neil thinks.

Avni was outside the Khurana house and was going.

Person: Avni, Avni, Avni listen.

Avni did not stop because it was Neil who was running to her. Neil holds her wrist, Avni stops and looks at the hands then at Neil who notices and looks at his hand. Neil leaves her wrist.

Neil: I am sorry.

Avni turns to go, Neil saw that.

Neil: Avni, Avni.

Neil comes in front of her.

Neil: please listen to me.

Avni looks away.

Neil: see, I know what bua said was wrong, very wrong she should not say all that but please don't cancel the deal because of that. I am saying sorry on her behalf please forgive her.

Avni: wow, you are saying sorry on her behalf like you are a pure person, clean from all type of sins.

Neil: ok, I am sorry for all my actions and misbehaves see I hold my ears please forgive me. Please.

Avni looks at Neil she can't believe he is the same person whom she met some time ago.

Neil: see, what is Kareena's fault in it, nothing. You are her inspiration she wants to be like you please don't do this. You know she called me today just for this meeting because she did not want to take any chance. Can you believe it? Please don't punish her for our deeds you are angry with me right then I will not come in between this and also make sure that but will not interfere in anything but please consider my wish. You also must have a sister.

Avni looks at Neil and flashes of her accident she squeezes her eyes and shocks her head like she was trying to erase that memory. Neil frowns.

Neil: are you ok?

Avni looks at Neil and before she breaks down she turns and starts walking. Neil looks at her and thinks.

Neil shouts: if you do this work then I will sign the deal with Mehta enterprises.

Avni stops and Neil looks at her.

Neil: I think, you did not listen to my name carefully. My name is Neil Khanna. Neil Khannna.

Avni wipes her unshed tears and turns. Neil smiles and comes to her.

Neil: Ashish Mehta is your father, right?

Avni shockingly looks at Neil.

Neil: today, he came to our office with his son Arnav Mehta, I met them and for your kind information I asked them to wait, I will tell them soon that we will sign the deal or not so if you organise Kareena's birthday I can sign that deal.

Avni: you are blackmailing me?

Neil smiles.

Neil: no, I am offering you a deal. I mean you will not want your family's business to suffer, right.

Avni glares at him. Avni shows him a finger to warn: you.

But, Avni stops and thinks.

Avni in mind: Arav?

Avni: one minute.

Neil frowns. Avni goes to the side and takes out her phone and calls someone. On the other side, Sonia was going to the living area, her phone rings she smiles to see the caller I'd.

Sonia: yes Avni.

Avni: ab bhabhi, when Arav will go to the camp.

Sonia: after two days, why?

Avni squeezes her eyes.

Sonia: Avni, Avni.

Avni: yaa bhabhi. Nothing bhabhi just came to my mind so, I asked.

Sonia frowns.

Avni: ok bhabhi, I will talk to you later.

Sonia wants to talk but Avni cuts the call. Avni bits her lip and thinks then she turns.

Avni in mind: if it was only about the deal then I will never do it but it is about my Arav so, I have to listen to this Gorilla.

Avni goes to Neil.

Neil: so, what you think?

Avni: I am ready but don't think I am afraid of you.

Neil smiles.

Neil: so deal done.

Neil forwards his hand.

Avni: I will send someone from my office, brief him about everything then we will start our work. You will get qualitative work it is my guarantee if you want to add any changes then tell him that thing also. Our team will send you all the details about the theme if you have any query you can call our office. Thank you.

Avni turns and goes. Neil looks at his hand and takes it back and shook his head.

Neil: lady don.

Neil smiles.

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