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Legacy (marauders second generation)

Legacy written by: @shadow23march

Okay to be honest I'm not so sure what I'm supposed to talk about. So far there have only been profiles on the characters which can be a turnoff for readers.

My advice on how to start and not make it cliche is don't set out to be liked by others. That's how I do mine. If I try to make my books liked by others I'll tend to write what other popular books have in theirs. But you need to be original. Write something that hasn't been written before. I mean if they're so in the great hall obviously that isn't copying because they need to eat eventually. You'll never know where you can get inspiration and if you do get it then write about it! Even J.K Rowling got the name "Hogwarts" from a garden that held lilies called Hogwarts. I really hope this helped and please keep in mind that this is all constructive criticism and never meant to hurt anybody's feelings.