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The Magnificence of Harry Potter by @stayingpawsitive
Cadmus should NOT BE CRYING IN THE PROLOGUE IM SAD HES PRECIOUS STOP.
Okay, now that I'm passed that, I'll actually review now.
Anyway, Dumbledore is up to something. He is up to something. What did Cadmus's parents do? Why did they volunteer? WHY?
Okay, now this is the review, I promise.
The prologue had me hooked. Omg and it wasn't even the writing tho. Idk if it's because my reading setting is black, but this looked so aesthetically pleasing I just—
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Just look at it!
Okay, prologue was great. You grabbed me and now I'm stuck. I'm here forever.
IM MEVER LETTING GO JACK.
Okay, I wasn't sure if you specified yet, but what's Cadmus's house? I NEED TO KNOW. TELL ME. TELL ME NOW.
Alright, I feel like you could describe his friends a little better. Where did lovebirds come from? I need some backstory on his friends because I know they're beautiful but I needmore.
Everything just flows together so well! I love it!! Keep up the excellent work!!
