HP Fanfiction Help (closed for catch up)

Gone Again {George Weasley}

Gone Again by @takeourwords (Again, sorry I couldn't tag you. Stupid phone can't you do anything right!?)

This story is really great. I love the characters and the plot and everything it's just really good in general!

There was one little thing I read that had me a bit confused (and this is my only critique). When Wren finds the dead bird the day she found out about her magic, she revived it. I was confused because like... no magic can bring back the dead. It's not really a big deal or anything; just a little bird, but I just...

thought you ought to know! *faints*

But it's okay because everything else is literally great. Siriusly.

Literally the only reason I brought up the bird thing is because there's nothing wrong with the story at all. There is nothing I would change at all. There are no Mary Sues, no Gary Stus, no useless characters. The plot is original. You've managed to do everything right! Rock on.

George is so in character too; it literally makes me so happy. I like how you've made him sad, but not depressed. You have him talk about Fred like he's still alive and with him and that makes me really happy; I applaud you. 👏👏👏

(Anyway, if anyone is looking for a good HP fanfic, I highly suggest Gone Again. It is fantastic.)