THINGS WRONG WITH THE WALKING DEAD FANFICS ii. | diary entry
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My name is Tiffany Valentine. I'm sixteen years old. I have long blonde hair, which is usually in a ponytail. I have blue eyes, and I'm quite skinny. I'm a B cup. At the moment, I'm wearing a one direction crop top with black leggings. I also have some Victoria's Secret underwear on. I-
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hahah let me stop you right there.
It's a walker apocalypse. People are eating people. And you? You're telling us what you look like and what you're wearing. I think I speak for a lot of the fandom when I tell you, we don't care.
A good author will make the readers visual what the character looks like without doing a job interview description. For example;
I tied my blonde hair into a ponytail, doing so for the sole purpose of the risk of being grabbed by a walker gets lowered. Sighing loudly, I turned back to the mirror. The crop top I was wearing was tattered and dirty, which is a pity, because I have to admit, it's one of my favourites. I'm more skinny than I used to be, and my blue eyes have lost their sparkle...
Yada yada. You're not seriously writing a diary entry whilst everyone is fighting walkers. Unless you're going to write the fucking walkers into a page, then you're useless and should get a reality check. Wake up, dude.
