The Slayer, The Lover, and The Vampire[Watty Awards 2012]

Violet has not had an ordinary life. Her family was very close with the vampire community until her parents were murdered when she was five years old. That's when she was taken in by her Uncle Vlad and trained to kill vampires for their suspected murder of her parents. Now eleven years later she discovers a photograph that might make the vampires innocent. Now finding out her parents murder is unsolved, she vigorously tries to unravel the mystery while uncovering clues that expose that her life has been a lie. With the help of her friends she tries to solve the murder of her parents while trying to figure out her own life.
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You forgot a capital and a comma

"Did you hear me[,] sir?" [H]e slowly nods his head, nice prologue though!
This is a perfect prologue in my eyes! Love its short and sweetness! Immediate hook to keep the reader wanting more! nice one, voted:!)
You might want to add more descriptions. Also, i feel like a lot of sentence are dull... so try using more variety~

hope this comment help~
It's good, and sad! You just need a lot more descriptions! A lot of your sentences start with "I" and "Uncle" so try and add variety to your sentences!
Great start to the story! I voted for it :) I like how you have drawn the reader in, it makes me want to read on!
Awww thats sad and i didn't see anything in grammar that was wrong also is this like a vampire story or a slayer story im not sure


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The Slayer, The Lover, and The Vampire[Watty Awards 2012]
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