Reviewer : Alice (Sorry rev. Laky isn't available atm)
• TOTAL MARKS- ①⓪⓪
|- ⑤ Mᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ғᴏʟʟᴏᴡɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴜʟᴇs. -5/5
|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ. -4/5 There is a good amount of comments even I commented. You have written those paragraph so nicely that it makes us, the readers comment, keep it up.
|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴄᴏᴠᴇʀ. -5/5 I liked the cover its beautiful and perfect and it also matches the aura of your story thumbs up.
|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴅᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ. -5/5 Description is a little bit long although it's okay. Like its enough to make the readers curious besides it did not reveal much about your story.
|- 10 ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴛɪᴛʟᴇ. -10/10 Title is also perfect, it is a rare one...and the readers can get an idea by your title about what is the story about.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴘʟᴏᴛ. -10/10 Book's plot is surely interesting, I found it rare like I have never read a story like this. Maybe there are some books as such but for me its unique and amazing.
|- ②⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴠᴏᴄᴀʙᴜʟᴀʀʏ. -19/20 I am really impressed with your vocabulary, it is fantastic. You have used different words perfectly in your chapters just like a professional writer. I didn't see any grammar mistakes but there were few typos so make sure to correct them.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs Fᴏʀ ᴘʟᴏᴛ ᴛᴡɪsᴛs ᴀɴᴅ ᴀᴛᴛʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ. -7/10 I did not see any plot twists in your story, usually when there is not any plot twists in a story it gets boring but your story is different, it did not bored me. Maybe there will be one in upcoming chapters. As I was reading your story I was being curious about what will happen next and this is the thing that needs for attracting the readers, to be very honest your story is amazing thumbs up.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴇᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴅᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴍᴇɴᴛ. -10/10 Okay that is one of the things that I love in your story, your jokes and the savageness of the girl that you have shown is amazing it was relatable- Emotions,I was feeling them like amazing sis you have write them perfectly,and characters development then there was a development in the girls character because of Jimin.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴠɪᴛʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏғ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ. -6/10 Way of writting is pretty good but I see some lack of Creativity. And I know you can do some Creativity in your story to make it more better so go for it, although its okay like With ample amount of creativity your story is still good.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏᴘɪɴɪᴏɴ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋ. -10/10
Total marks:91/100
🆈🅾🆄🆁 🆁🅴🆆🅸🅴🆆 : I personally loved your story, this is the first time when I read something like this and it impresses me a lot. And the quotes (I'm not sure if those were quotes-) that you have used in the very first of your chapters are really beautiful although my small brain only understands few of them :'). And again your vocabulary is fantastic, teach me some- just kidding. As I said you write like a professional writer so I don't think you have to improve anything in your story, everything is perfect. One thing that I want to say is your books chapters I think were too long so it was getting a little bit boring, but there was nothing wrong in it since there are Stories that consists of more longer chapters. And one more thing about the description of your story although its good but I would suggest you to make it a little bit short. And You are done with your story thumbs up.
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