The Way You Make Me Feel - A...

By moonwalkergal

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It all started in 1987, when supermodel; Tatiana Thumbtzen is casted in Michael Jackson's music video, The Wa... More

Chapter 1 - A meeting
Chapter 2- Guess who's coming to dinner?
Chapter 3 - A sleepover
Chapter 4 - New beginnings with a kiss
Chapter 5 - A four letter word
Chapter 6 - You're the one that I want
Chapter 7- Secret Talents
Chapter 8- Tatiana's time
Authors Note - Changes in the story
Chapter 9- What about us?
Chapter 10- Forgiveness, and betrayal
Chapter 11 - Leaked
Chapter 12 - A nightmare, and Korea
Chapter 13- Temptation and lateness
Chapter 14- Secrets
Chapter 15 - Oprah
Chapter 16- Threatened
Chapter 17 - Broken Glass and a request
Chapter 18- I want her to be mine
Chapter 19 - The Virgin
Chapter 20 - Body Language
Chapter 21 - Preying for you
Authors Note - Chapter 21
Chapter 22- Meeting the Thumbtzens
Chapter 23 - Permissions, and Relationships
Chapter 24 - New friendships
Chapter 24 - Reunited
Chapter 25- Can't take it
Chapter 26 - LaToya's Allegations
Chapter 27- Encounters
Chapter 28- Acting
Chapter 29 - The pain comes rushing in
authors note
Chapter 30 - Mind Games
Ricky Lawson
Chapter 31- Performance
Chapter 32- So much drama, so much time
Chapter 33 - Paul's Worries, and Diana's kindness
Chapter 34- Trouble in Paradise
Chapter 35- Smile Tatiana
Chapter 36- The slap heard around the world
Chapter 37 - Mad
Chapter 38 - Dr. Walker
Chapter 39- The Complicated Love
Chapter 40- In Tatiana we trust?
Chapter 41- Limitations
Chapter 42 - If I could tell you
Chapter 43 Part 1- Papa-paprazzi
Chapter 43 Part 2 - Exposed
Chapter 44 Part 1- She had it coming.....
Chapter 44 part 2- Cry
Chapter 45- The Wrecking Ball
Chapter 45 Part 2- Changes
Chapter 46 - Did he even care?
Chapter 47- Katherine visits
Chapter 48 - Alive
Chapter 49- The good thing about love....
Chapter 50 part 1 - Grammy Night| Red Carpet
Chapter 50 part 2- The Grammy's| Performance
Author's Note
Chapter 50 part 3- The Grammys| Winners and Losers
Chapter 51- Paul Vs. Rachel; The Ugly truth.
Chapter 52- Bet on it.
Chapter 53- Michael, somebody she use to know...
Chapter 54- Breaking News
Chapter 55- He loves her.....
Chapter 56- Tears from heaven
Chapter 57- Strength
Chapter 58- The clock is ticking....
Authors Note - On a rampage.
Chapter 59- He won't see her...
Chapter 60 - Drunk in love
About the updates
Chapter 61- Moving on....maybe.
Chapter 62- Jack is back
Chapter 63- Locked Down
Chapter 64- Michael's rage, and sorrow.
Chapter 66- More breaking news...
Announcement!
Chapter 67-Can't let her get away
Chapter 68- It's a deal
The updates, and other things.
Chapter 69- Lost minds.
Chapter 70 part 1- Happy Birthday Paul.
Chapter 70 part 2- Happy Birthday Paul| Guilt
Chapter 71- Under the Influence
Not a Chapter but important
Chapter 72- Fight for you
Chapter 73- Rachel strikes back
Chapter 74 - The Reunion (Part 1)
Chapter 74- The Reunion (Part 2)
Chapter 74 - The Reunion (Part 3)
IMPORTANT
Chapter 75- Thoughts
Chapter 76- Beware of the dog
Chapter 77- Bonnie and Clyde
Chapter 78- Michael's offer
Chapter 79-
Chapter 80- Michael's confession
Attention!
Chapter 81- Stay with me
Chapter 82 - Unexpected
Chapter 83- Time Won't Let Me Go
Chapter 84 - Mr. Thumbtzen
Chapter 85 - Protection Program
Chapter 86 - The Boss
Chapter 87 - Surrender
Chapter 88 - Nightmares and Drugs
Chapter 89 - Packing Secrets
Chapter 90-
Chapter 91- Six feet in
Chapter 92 - Ding Dong, the B***h Is Dead
Chapter 93 - The Story of Jack
Chapter 94 - The Gang is Back
Chapter 95- Rehearsal
Chapter 96- Heartbreak Hotel
Chapter 97 - The Walk
Chapter 98- Shadows
Chapter 99- Faye or Faux
Chapter 100 - Fisherman
Chapter 101 -Findings
Chapter 102- Elevated
Chapter 103 -
Chapter 104- Key
Chapter 105 - Baby
Chapter 106 - Yours
Chapter 107 - Rivals part 1
Chapter 107 - Rivals part 2
Chapter 107- Rivals Part 3
Chapter 107- Rivals part 4
Chapter 107- Rivals part 5
Chapter 108 - Dr. Prince
Chapter 109 - Busy
Chapter 110 - Kiss
Chapter 111 - Planning and Plotting
Chapter 112 -Backstage Luck
Chapter 113- Two Bodies, One Soul
Chapter 114 - Torn apart
Chapter 115 - Coming Out
Chapter 116 - Falling shards
Chapter 117 - The Universe
Chapter 118 - Make Love
Chapter 119- Coverup
Chapter 120 - Pink Lagoon
Chapter 121 - The Big Bad Bang
Chapter 122 - His Muse
Chapter 123- Wet
MJFA'S
TWYMMF MOVIE TRAILER
Chapter 124 - Purple Envy
Chapter 125 - Queen of his heart
Chapter 126 - New Members
Chapter 127 - Michael's Clarity
Chapter 128 -
Chapter 129 - Michael's pain
Chapter 130 - Meltdown
Chapter 131 - Beauty and the Beast
Characters Q & A
Chapter 132 - The Escape
Chapter 133 - The who's and what
Chapter 134 - Stampede
Chapter 135 - Screams of P̶a̶s̶s̶i̶o̶n̶
MJ Birthday Interview
Character Q/A : Part 2
Chapter 136 - Michael loses control
Chapter 137 - I want you forever
Important Letter from the Author
Chapter 138
Chapter 139 - Over
Chapter 140 - The contract
Chapter 141 - Chained to reality
Chapter 142 - Scamming Secruity
Chapter 143 - Blonde Bomb
Chapter 144 - The Tape
Chapter 145 - Winnie the Winner
Chapter 146 - When galaxies collide
Chapter 147 - The Value of Happiness
Chapter 148 - Call
Pray 4 Joe
Chapter 149- Sunrise Driver
Update
Chapter 150 - Love Fantasy
#MJISINNOCENT
Chapter 151 - One More Forever
Chapter 152
Disclaimer/Authors Note
Chapter 153
Chapter 154 - On the Run

Chapter 65- Awaken

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Tatiana's POV

I hear the machine that’s monitoring start to beep faster and faster. I look around  nervous, scared and I feel as if my heart about to jump out of my chest. I start panting. I feel stinging on my face and other certain parts of my body, I take a shaky breathe and winces.

The area on my face is bumpy and it stings bad, when her fingers grazed over it. They were stitches, just like what I had in her dream when -- that stranger came in my room. I frown. Who was he?

A woman in a white coat with a clipboard casually walks in my room with a clipboard walking in. I look at him confused and clears my throat.

"H-Hi...." I whisper my voice barely above a whisper.

Immediately her eyes shoot up and she gasps slightly, leaving me even more confused than before. "What is going on?"

 “You’re awake.” she gapes, and I look down at my arms seeing IV's come out of my arm.

 “Well, welcome back.” She smiles, and I raise a suspicious yet confused eyebrow. Maybe I've been kidnapped.....the thought leaves my heart racing fast again as the moniters go off.

"W-where am I?" I ask my face screaming terror. She walks up to me and sits in a seat gently rubbing my arm.

“I don’t think you’ve caught on yet,” Dr. Herndon smiles gently,  “You have been in a coma for the past seven weeks. Do you remember what happened to you?”

I swallowed hard at this new information. Seven weeks?

"I-I don't remember..."

“What was the last thing you remember?” Dr. Herndon reaches over for the mini-fridge next to the bed and pulls out a bottle of water, and grabbing a plastic cup that was standing on top of the fridge.

“Um…I-I was in my apartment with Rachel....” I answer slowly, watching Dr. Herndon pour the water into the cup. "S-she was telling me about a job oppurtunity..."

"And what was this job oppurtunity?" she asks. I frown a little.

"T-That someone had called wanting me in a music video....b-but I don't remember who...."

 Dr.  Herndon nods, handing me the cup of water and I accept it with both hands.

“How do you feel?”

I slowly lift my shoulders up and down as if she was shrugging, but slowly. “My ribs hurt, my head hurts,  my throat’s sore.” Plus the areas of her body where these weird bumps were....., including my face.

“Well, you had a broken rib.” She announces, scribbling something onto the clipboard that caged a sheet of paper. “You had surgery for it and it’s almost healed, you’re just going to be sore for a little while.”

I swallow hard and nodded her head, instantly regretting it.

A broken rib… That sounded extremely painful. I was happy I wasn’t awake to suffer that kind of pain.

“It’s best if you drink lots of water, you seem a little dehydrated and it should help your throat. But we’ll give you something for your pain.” Dr. Herndon nodded her head.

“Thank you.” I say forced a smile, though it was weak.

Dr. Herndon nodded her head and began to head out when she was randomly reminded another announcement she had to give to me. “Oh, and also…” She turns on her heel and walks back over to Tatiana.

"I'll be calling your family and fiancee." she says. I look at her confused. I have a fiancee?

Paul's POV

"Are you going to do it?" I ask leaning against the kitchen counter quietly.

"I-I don't know, Paul...." Eva whispers looking down. "It's been almost 7 weeks and--" her sentence gets cut off by the phone ringing. Winnie and I jump a little, as Eva sighs and picks it up from the wall tiredly.

"Hello?" she says. She pauses for a moment and her eyes widen for a second.

"Y-Yes...I-I'll be right there immediatly." she says quickly hanging up the phone.

"What is it?" Tatiana's father asls walking in the room. Eva grabs her purse in a rush.

"T-Tatiana...s-she's awake." she says as we all stare at her in shock.

Michael's POV

She was pregnant, I look at the wall angrily. And no one told me. Not even my own mother who knew....

I shake my head angrily. I could have been there, and supported her. And just maybe, we could have worked everything out. I burst into tears and puts my head in my hands.

Just as I finally feel like I can have a good cry, the telephone in his hotel room rang.

“Hello?” I sigh, irritated.

“Hi, Michael.” Eva greeted, and I squint my eyes gripping the phone tighter.

“Eva....It’s been a while.” I say hoarsely.

“I know.”I can tell she’s smiling over the phone.

“Is everything okay?” I ask almost forgetting about-- well you know....

 “I was just calling to tell you that Tatiana woke up, since you wanted me to.” She explains. “I’m on my way to go to the hospital......”

Tatiana's POV

I lay in bed, unraveling the curled edges to my paper cup; going into deep thinking. I'm getting married? I sigh and closes my eyes resting my head on the pillow. To who? I grip the cup in frustration. I can't remember anything. I'm surprised I remember my name. Before I can finish having a pity party for myself a soft knock interrupts my thoughts. I sit up on my hands wincing.

"Hello?" I say hoarsely. The door opens slowly and there stands Dr. Herndon with a few people behind her. I blink for a couple of seconds; my vision blurred. I look closely and sees my mother, Winnie, Dad, and --- a really handsome man next to him; with bright blue eyes.

"Tatiana?" Dr. Herndon says. "This is your mom, dad, sister.....and fiancee. They came to see you."

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Tatiana is finally awake!!!!! Its about time. But will Paul and everyone explain that he isn't really her fiancee? But the big question is.........

Will Michael come back?

Stay tuned!

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