Manan FF Intense Love ✔️

By zarnishkhan12

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CAST
chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
woh humsafar tha
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chaptr 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Chapter 55
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Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
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Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Eid Mubarak
Chapter 71 (last Episode)

Chapter 60

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By zarnishkhan12

Hey...

I know i am late but kya karon test ki tyaari krni hai..

Without wasting time lets start.

Manik came out of the room fustratedly while nandini followed him smiling slightly.

Manik reached till table and everyone greeted him while manik nod his head with a smile.

Ni:" manik what is wrong with u. Where are your manners. Sab tumhe wish kr rhe hain aur tum ho k sirf sar hila rhe ho." Niyonika scolded him while manik nodded his head in no and nandini took her place.

M:" mom aap mujhe ghalat samajh rhe hain.. mein ap ko kaise bataon k mei bol nhi sakta." Manik was thinking with a bad face

R:" seriously manik u are making faces for ur mom. Have u lost it." Raj scolded him more while manik again nod in no with a sad face.

M:" dad ab mei aap ko kaise samjhaon." Manik thought sadly

Sa:" rehne bhi do na buddy. Kuch nhi hota. Aur yeh kya tum bache ko subah subah dant rhe ho. Breakfast toh sakoon se krne ho usse." Sanaya said while raj kept mum.

Everyone started the dinner while manik face showed disappointment. Nandini saw this and she got really hurt with this fact that manik got sad early morning.

Manik was eating egg and looking at everyone. His eyes stopped on nandini and he smiled. Manik coughed to gain her attention but his cough gained cabir attention and he started to pat his back thinking something got struck in manik's throat.

C:" manik toh theek hai na.?" Cabir question caught everyone attention. Everyone looked at manik while cabir's patting increased his cough.

S:" cabir yeh manik ko pani pila de" sid said passing glass tu look cabir who instantly held the glass near his mouth and made him drink forcefully. To which manik tried to breath and water went in the wind pipe. Which increased manik coughing.

C:" pani nhi chahiye toh kya chahiye.?" Cabir asked manik to which before manik could reply arnav in concern passed the glass of juice towards cabir.

Ar:" cabir yeh pila." Arnav asked cabir and cabir instantly held the glass for manik. Manik tried to deny but cabir was adamant. Manik drank one sip but before taking next sip manik kept the glass away.

Ab:" manik agar tujhe kuch chahiye toh mujhe bol de. Aise chup kun baitha hai." Abhi asked to which manik nodded his head in no and pointed his plate

M" yaar.. kya zabardasti ka pila rhe ho. Chahta kya tha aur ho kya gya" manik cursed himself.

Ab:" kya yaar guys. Manik ne tum sab se yeh manga tha water or juice. Usse yeh sab nhi chahiye." Abhi said while everyone looked at him.

M:" thank God.. koi toh samjha. Abhi you are my real bro." Manik said happily

Ab:"manik ko apne egg per salt dalwani hai. " abhi said happily while others cursed their self and apologize from him.

M:" seriously. No yaar." Manik kept shouting in his heart. While the cabir sprayed black pepper on his egg.

Cabir was about to spray more but stopped listening .....

Manik....

M:" stoooppppp.. stop it guys. Do u want to kill me." Manik shouted while other looked at him shocked but to more precise nandini was shocked.

Manik when realized what he did covered his mouth with shock.

M:" what i did.. i talked.. i talked... shit.. " manik was cursing himself while other were looking at him if he was an alien.

C:" manik tu theek hai na.. dimagh to nhi chal gya na tera." Cabir asked touching manik forehead and neck while manik pushed his hand away. Sid, khushi and navya laughed loudly while manik now was cursing his friends.

Ni:" manik whats wrong.?" Niyonika asked seeing his indifferent behaviour.

M:" actually mom mei ne nandini se bet lagaye thi k mei aaj adha din tak kuch nhi bolon ga nhi but here 3 hours bhi chup nhi reh paya." Manik said to which everyone laughed loudly while nandini just smile where as manik was sitting with grumpy face.

After everyone was done everyone left the table to give manik and nandini a little privacy.

Manik was sitting with a bad sad face. While nandini was looking at him thoughtfully

N:" why so sad.?" Nandini asked raising an eyebrow.

M:" yeh tum mujh se poch rhi ho. Tumhare samne hi toh hara hon mei bet." Manik said sadly. While nandini smile.

N:" manik.. tumhe kya lagta hai k mei ne tumse yeh bet kun lagaye.?" Nandini asked while manik gave her a blank and confused look.

N:" manik. Tum ne kaha k shahid ka dumb act krna kon se bari baat hai. But manik voice bohat matter krti hai. Yeh sab log jo hai tumhe ache se jante the still they were not able to understand ur silence. But agar koi us situation mei ho jahan aap k apne na hon toh koi aap ki khamoshi ko nhi samajhta manik. Words matter alot." Nandini said while manik looked at her impressed with her words.

M:" No one in the world can think like u." Manik said while nandini smiled.

N:" acha ab yahen baithe raho gye ya phir mujhe room tak bhi le kr jao gye." Nandini said while manik nod and picked her up in his arms.

Evening

Everyone was sitting in living room. While nandini was looking looking at mukti continously.

N:" kya baat hai.?" Nandini asked gaining everyone's attention while mukti looked shocked.

Mu:" what..??" Mukti asked almost like a whisper.

N:" manik.. yahan koi guitar mil sakta hai." Nandini asked to which manik nod and asked Robin (servant) to bring guitar.

Robin brought the guitar and nandini hold it adjusting in her hands.

N:" sing mukti.. sing it out. Out inside you. I know aik raat sab theek nhi kr sakti. 2 salon ka pain nhi ghayab ho sakta. But atleast speak it out. Usse apne andar mat chupao." Nandini said strumming the guitar. While mukti looked at her.

Mukti was not able to start to cabir said.

Bay khudi besabab nahi Ghalib
Kuch to hai jiski parda dari hai

Cabir said looking at her and abhi while mukti buckled herself .

Main kitnay tokron main toti, koi jane na
Main kitna raaton mein roti, koi jane na

Mukti sang remebering those sleepless night she spend in orphanage. Those tears she shed from her childhood while abhi was looking at her deeply.

Mera hath thaam ke, Ahsan tunay kiya
Gumnam si thi main, naam tunay dia

Mukti sang looking at abhi remembering the time she met abhi and all those beautiful moments she spend with him. His proposal. His deep stares. His magical words. Everything about him made her life so beautiful.

Nadaniyaan main jo hum say howay, Maaf kari maula
Tanhaiyoon main rota raha, Maaf kari maula
Ye kaisa jurm hua, Kay tera hi mujrim hova

Abhi sang thinking about what he did. The sin he has done while leaving mukti and all the pain she went through because of his mistake. Remembering those tearfull nights.

Mera dard koi kun bantay
Mere Aanchal mein liptay howay kaante
Mughy naam koi kun deta
Meri qismat main bus hay ghum chay

Mukti sang remembering the way harshad behaved with her. How she lived a nameless life because of harshad's selfishness.

Janay anjanain main bhool hoi
Janay badua kisi ki qabool hoi
Janay kyun tujhko paake bhi kho diya
Mujhe pachtawa hai aisa kay ro diye

Abhi sang remembering his mistake of leting her go. Leaving her to bear all the pain alone. He thought someone cursed his love.

Mera haal janta hai khuda, Kya bataun tujhe
Meri dansda adhoori rahi, Kya sunaoon tujhe

Mukti sang thinking that all the troubles she faced in her life are only known by God. No one ever can understand her emotions.

Nadaniyaan main jo hum say howay, Maaf kari maula
Tanhaiyoon main rota raha, Maaf kari maula
Ye kaisa jurm hua, Kay tera hi mujrim hova

Abhi finished the song while mukti was crying and everyone was sad to know her emotions. Abhi came towards mukti and hug her tightly in front of everyone.

Ab:" i know meri ghalti mafi k qabil nhi magar phir bhi give me a chance to explain.
So ... Mis Mukti Murthy kya tum aaj ki shaam mere saath bitao gi. Mujhe tumhare saath ko mehsos krna ka chance do gi." Abhi said holding her hand and standing infront of her . Mukti looked at sanaya then niyonika and then raj. And when all gave their approval she nod her head and everyone hooted for them. While mukti blushed and abhi smiled.

After 1 Hour

Navya was walking taking selfie and posting it. While cabir was walking busy playing games. Both were so concentrated that they didnt saw eachother and bumped into each other.

Na:" dekh k nhi chal sakte kya.?" Navya asked angrily.

C:" nhi.. nhi chal sakta tum toh chal sakti ho na. Tum hi chal leti." Cabir taunted her to which she made bad face.

Na:" toh yeh ankhen donate kr do. Tum toh faida le nhi sakte koi aur hi le ly ga." Navya said sarcastically

C:" you are right.. what about mei apni ankhe tumhe donate kr don." Cabir was cabir was he going to lose. He argued even more.

Na:" tum.. tumhari toh.... tumhe toh mei.. dekh lon gi." Navya said angrily.

C:" i know mei hon hi itna handsome jo aik baar dekh le baar baar dekhna chahta hai." Cabir said while navya made bad face.

Na:" handsome aur tum.. dekhana toh zara kon se angle se handsome ho tum." Navya laughed and she hold cabir face with her fingers and kept changing angle by turning it.

C:" you chipkali.. get lost.." cabir said angily while navya opened her mouth with shock.

Na:" hum chipkali.. tum ne hume chipkali ka. Agar hum chipkali hain na toh tum bhi kisi maindak (frog) se kam nhi ho." Navya said huffing in anger.

C:" itni baar toh hum ne chipkali nhi kaha jitna baar tum ne khud khud ko bol diya. Khair jaisa k tumhare kehne se mei sach mei frog ban jaon ga." Cabir said burning her a little more with his words.

Both were about to cross each other when navya slipped and cabir held her from her waist. Both were looking at eachother. For an instant and unknown emotion danced in their eyes but both covered it and stood straight. Looked at each other angrily turned their faces and walked away.

At Night

Sid was sitting in his car lost in some deep thoughts.

S:" jaon ya na jaon.... jata hon... nhi jata hon.. " Sid kept saying and finally decided to go.

He came inside a colony tyoe place and knocked a door. A girl came outside opening the door and was shocked looking at sid.

S:" Naina.." sid took her name as a prayer.

Nai:" tum... tum yahan kya kr rhi ho jao yahan se." Naina said looking at her surrounding.

S:" plzz meri aik baar baat sun lo. Mei tumhare bina nhi reh sakta. Mei janta hon mei itne dino se nhi tha. But mere paas us ka reason hai. Atleast mujhe aik chance do. " sid said holding her hand.

Nai:" Sid jao yahan se. Meri dunya aur tumhari dunya bohat alag hai. Agar kisi ne tumhe meri saath dekh liya toh tum jante ho tumhe kitna badly effect kr sakta hai." Naina said trying to make him understand.

S:" mujhe nhi farq parta woh mere bare mei kya sochte hain. Mei sirf itna janta hon k mei ne apni puri life mei aisa kabhi kisi k saath feel nhi kiya jaisa tumhare sath krta hon. " sid said while naina shook her head.

Nai:" sid sab abhi tumhe bohat asan lag rha hai. Magar itna asan hai nhi. Tum jante kya ho mere bare mei meri zindagi k bare mei. Kuch bhi nhi.. kuch bhi toh nhi .. plzz sid yahan se chale jao." Naina requested while sid start walking backwards stilling looking at her face and when reached a little away from her he did something which shocked naina to the core.

Awargi se dil bhar gaya
Teri gali mein rehne laga
Jaise kabhi bhi ki na kisiki
Teri fikar mein rehne laga

Sid sang looking deep in her eyes may be reading her soul and also giving her a chance to read his soul. To look into him. Telling her that how special she is. How different she is.

Tere aansu piyu main
Kabhi tujhko hassaun
Tujhe door se dekhun
Kabhi dil mein basaun

Sid sang more deeply this time taking steps closer to her. Reaching her soul and forwarding his hand to her so that she can hold it. While naina was crying she new all this. That he different but she was also being realistic and she knew how much she can effect him. How much she can corrupt his life and future.

Tere khaatir jeeyun main
Kabhi tujhpe lutaaun
Ye jaan meri jaan hai tu..bas tu..

Sid continued walking to her and now was standing so close to her that for a moment their breath felt one. Their body their soul felt one. For a moment their pain felt one ,their happiness felt one. In short they felt one.

Awargi se dil bhar gaya
Teri gali mein rehne laga

Sid again sang smiling a little telling how much she changed him. How much changed he felt with in himself just after holding her hand for once.

Tere aansu piyu main
Kabhi tujhko hassaun
Tujhe door se dekhun
Kabhi dil mein basaun

Tere khaatir jeeyun main
Kabhi tujhpe lutaaun
Ye jaan meri jaan hai tu..bas tu..

Sid today was adamant to look into her soul. To feel her pain. He wanted to give her the happiness she deserved. The pain the sorrow she felt. He knew she was not happy what she was doing. She was forced into it. But wanted to know how she got into all this. He wanted to take her out of this deep dark black tunnel.

Na tu khud ka tha kabhi
Na khuda ka main..
Tu mila toh hogaya
Khudbakhud tera main

Hone laga hai khud pe
Ab mujhko yakin
Imaan badal ke mera
Tu badalna nahi..

He held her face in his plams and kissed her forehead. A kiss of assurance. A kiss of purity. A kiss of strength. He was showering her with his unsaid feelings. He might be new to these feelings but was not that dumb to not understand what these feelings meant.

Tere khuda se maangu main kya?
Mujhko duaae aati nahi
Tujhse mohabbat kaise karun main?
Mujhko wafa ae aati nahi

Naina sang looking in his eyes but the words that escape her lips hurted his soul. He knew she would pushed him. Try to push him as far as she can but after all the pure confession he did through the song. He never knew she would neglect it too. He suddenly felt so much emptiness within himself. As she removed his hands from her face . His heart felt empty with the loss of contact.

Tujhe dekh ke lekhin
Yeh dil dagmagaaye

Naina sang with a purity in her eyes while as soon as the words escape her lios a beautiful smile adorn his face. He was happy atleat she agreed a little. And he felt he got his world . A whole world to live, to be happy. To love and to be loved.

Mujhe aazaan dekar
Tu mujhko jagaye
Mujhe meri nazar mein
Tu mujhko uttaye
Mera imaan meri jaan hai tu..

Bas tu.. Hai tu.. Hai Tu..

Naina finished it off but her words where like ice on his burning heart and soul which burned with the thought of rejection. With thought of heartbreak. With the thought of living a life without her. And at this moment he was sure he was ready to give anything, to lose anything to be with this girl. Either it be his career or his dream. His future or his life. He was ready..... Ready to hold her hand and walk on the path of life.

Precap: well who wants manan face to face confession. If u all want dont forget to vote and comment .. Remember INLINE COMMENTS ARE LOVE.

So yes... manan confession in next update. A very sweet wala cute wala innocent wala confession.

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Anni..

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