Manan FF Intense Love ✔️

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chapter 1
chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
woh humsafar tha
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
Chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chaptr 47
Chapter 48
Chapter 49
Chapter 50
Chapter 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
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Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
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Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Eid Mubarak
Chapter 71 (last Episode)

Chapter 55

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Hey...
Hope u all are fine....
Well mei update krne nhi wali thi but kuch bohat sweet log bohat pyaar se bohat time se update mang rhe the.. aur un ko baar baar mana krna acha nhi lag rha tha... So this update is for all those who voted and commented and commented again and again to get the  update..

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Manik entered in room and looked at nandini. He felt his heart was shouting with pain that his love got. he still trembled with the thought that what if he was not able to break that ropes on time. He would have died at that moment. He sat close to nandini...

Nandini waited for him to speak something. She thought he would also request her to wake up or fight with her  to wake up.. But he was just sitting quietly not doing anything. Manik was looking at her and memorizing her wounded face. After a long silence he spoked.

M:" I know tum yahi soch rhi ho gi k mei kuch bol kun nhi raha. Sirf tumhe aise dekhe kun ja rha hon." Manik paused for a while and holded her hand keeping his constant gaze on nandini . "Mei tumhe aise is liye dekh rha hon k tumhara yeh zakmi chehra mujhe yaad rhe. Aur kya tum janti ho k mei kun yaad krna chahhta hon,." Manik again questioned her but this time he brought her hand near his lips and kissed it gently. But his eyes not for a fraction of second left her face.
" Mei tumhe aise is liye  yaad krna chahta hon k mei tumhara yeh haal krne walon ko is sse bhi zaida khatarnaak saza dy sakon." manik stopped and took a long breath to control his emotions.

Nandini was struggling to open her eyes when she felt something wet on her back side of hand. And soon she realized that he was crying . She battled with the eyelashes as she found them to be extremely heavy but struggling greatly she finally opened her eyes.

( Isn't this amazing that love gave you this much strength that u make possible what at that moment felt impossible. May be this is called intense love.. May be???? What do u guys think..?)

Nandini looked at manik's blurry figure and blink her eyes few times to clear her vision. And when her vision cleared she looked at his ever so charming face and a small yet beautiful smile adorn her face .

Manik felt her gaze and lifted his eyes to look at her wounded yet serene face. He kept looking at her to make himself believe that she is woken up. And when he believed he turn his face while nandini frown.

M:" Tum bohat buri ho nandini Bohat buri." Manik complained like a baby.

N:' han tum sahi keh rhe ho." nandini also replied. The frown was again replaced by peace.

M:" Han aur tum bohat selfish bhi ho. Tum ne aik baar bhi yeh nhi socha k agar tumhe kuch ho gya toh mera kya ho ga. Hum sab ka kya ho ga." Manik again complained  

N:" Han tum sahi keh rhe ho " Nandini also agreed with him.

M:" Han Ur bohat rude bhi. Itne time se mere sath thi magar kabhi meri feelings ko reciprocate nhi kiya." Manik kept one more complained forward.

N:' Han aur arrogant bhi.." Nandini this time smiled and gave him another reason to blame her.

M:" Han aur nhi toh kya.. Arrogant bhi ho.. Kabhi meri feelings ko appreciate bhi nhi kiya." Manik again blame her.

N:" Sahi kaha." nandini agreed with him.

M:" Aur ab mei tum se kabhi baat nhi karo ga." Manik said little an angry little boy.

N:" han BAS MERE SATH REHNA.." Nandini said and manik who was looking at her hand looked at her face.
" Bhale mujh se baat mat krna manik magar mere sath rehna . Mujhe kabhi akela chor kr mat jana. Kun k ab agar tum chor kr gye toh phir mere wapisi ka koi dar nhi ho ga. Koi darwaza aisa nhi ho gis se mere liye zindagi andar aa sake." Nandini said all this in her slow voice while both of them had their eyes locked.

M:' Kabhi bhi nhi.. Tum chaho tab bhi nhi.. Tum mango gi tab bhi nhi.. Kisi surat bhi nhi..' Manik said purely with all his heart. While nandini looked at him lovingly.

Manik moved further and kissed her forehead then eyes then cheeks then nose and then sweetly peck her lips moving back to his earlier position.

M:" well dil toh nhi chah rha magar kya karon bahar sab ko inform krna hai k tumhe hosh  aa gya hai. " Manik said and took his mobile out and msg everyone about nandini's condition. Nandini smiled on his intelligence. Manik again hold nandini hand and continued his job of staring her.

Everyone outside got the msg and came inside one by one. Sanaya entered and came close to nandini . Her eyes were full of tears and cheeks also had dried marks of tear.

N:" Uff Kitna roti hain aap. Ab toh ap ki behen bhi paas hai aap k phir kun ro rhi hain. Kya dikkat hai bhaye.." Nandini said dramatically while everyone smile.

Sa:" Tum theek ho na nandini.. Kitni chot lag gye tumhe." Sanaya said with hoarse voice her eyes showed her pain . 

N:" Yeh toh kuch bhi nhi mom. Aap soch bhi nhi saktien k aap k yeh ansu mujhe kitni takleef pohancha rhe hain. Mom mei yeh sab toh bardast kr sakti hon magar aap k ansu nhi." Nandini said slowly yet lovingly."  Aur dekhye yeh aap ki beti kaise phoot phoot kr ro rhi hai. Uff mujhe yeh samajh nhi aata k abhi toh mujh kuch howa bhi nhi aur aap log aise ro rhe ho agar sach mei kuch ho jata ...." before nandini continue more sanaya slapped her tightly on her hand to which she shriek in pain  and sanaya glared her her.

Sa:" bakwas kaise aur kab krni hai who koi is larki se sekhe.. Oh God...!! Nandini kahan se ate hain aise ache ache ideas han..." sanaya scolded her while manik kept massaging her hand slowly to easy her  pain from the moment she shouted in pain.

Niyonika moved further while nandini was telling abhimanyu to make mukti  quite to which everyone smile.

( People who care for others when they themselves are in pain are great. And I think we should never let such people go from our lives . What do u think..???)

Ni:" Nandini..." Niyonika called her lovingly " Meii..." Niyonika was going to say further but stopped listening nandini..

N:" Massi maa.." Nandini called her softly.

Ni:" Tum mujhe janti ho.." Niyonika asked her surprised

N:" Offcourse..aap ko nhi janu gi toh kisi janu gye. Mom aap ko bohat miss krti ahin aur mujhe bhi aap se milne ka bohat shoaq tha. Mom kehti hai mei aap jaise hon toh socha apne jaise shaks se milna toh zarori hai." Nandini said cutely while niyonika felt extreme love for nandini. She never had a daughter and today when she found nandini consoling sanaya she felt an extreme urge to have a daughter.

S:" Thank God nandini tumhe hosh aa gya hai. waise aap sab ko is ka credit mujhe dena chahiye. Kun k nandini ko hosh sirf meri wajah se aya hai. Actually nandini mere emotion samajhti hai aur issi liye mei ne use jo kuch ...." siddharth spoke dramatically but stopped looking at there faces which have questions like.. ' are u kidding man..', ' seriously dude..', ' have u lost it..', ' Be quite or u will be dead.'. fearing the last expression siddharth shut his mouth.


( Poor sid.. Its true funny people pay a huge cost. As no one can see the pain hidden in their eyes. Its actually sad that the people who makes other laugh literally cry when alone and that's why the don't like loneliness .. What do u think..???)

Soon the doctor came  and checked nandini..

D:" Hum inhe aik week k liye under observation rakhen gye aur phir yeh ghar ja saktien hain." Doctor said blasting bomb on nandini.

N:" What...???" nandini shouted  shocked with the new found information.
"What do u mean under observation .. Arreee mei koi scientific problem hon jo mujhe under observation rakha jaye.. Aur who bhi aik week k liye. U must have lost ur senses. Listen mei koi aik week k liye yahan nhi rehne wali mujhe discharge karo warna is hospital mei tumhara rehna mushkil kr don gi." Nandini said, warned, Shouted and what not on the doctor. while everyone was too shocked to react.

Sa:" But nandini.." sanaya tried to interfere..

N:" Mom Please..." Nandini also looked at her 

M:" But Nandini meri baat sonu doctor jo keh rhe hain." manik was about to explain her more but stopped.

N:" Manik.. Meri baat ache  se sun lo. Agar mujhe agle aik ghante mei  discharge na kiya na toh chilla chilla kr apne aap ko aur bimar kr lon gi and trust me mujhe koi nhi rok paye ga." Nandini warned him while manik gulped hard.

Ni:" Theek hi toh keh rhi hai, ghar mei hum sab hain na is ka khayal rakhne k liye. toh  bhala isse kya zarorat hai yahan rehne ki. Waise bhi hospital mei theek hon e k bajaye aur bimar ho jaye gi.:" Niyonika seconded her and blinked her eyes for sanaya who relaxed while nandini squeal happily..

N:" Aik massi maa hi hain jo mujhe samajhti hain . Baki toh kisi ko meri parwah hi nhi hai.." nandini said while niyonika kissed her forehead lovingly.

While manik bend down a little reaching her ear when found everyone busy in one thing or the other and said.

M:" Aise baat nhi hai mei bhi samajhta hon tumhe , Parwah krta hon tumhari, Balke Bohat zarori ho tum mere liye ." Manik said huskily his lips touching her ear with every word and kissed her ear before taking his position back while nandini blushed to the darkest shade of red.
She wanted to shout with happiness and ask every single person on earth that is there anyone more lucky than her and if yes then do they have MANIK.

So here u have the update well amazing track is on the way and way more manan scenes but all I need is ur support and love because without that its not possible..
So Shower the story with the support of votes and love of comments..

End of chapter
Love u all
Anni..

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