Author: @MissLacybee
Reviewer: theendofeverything03
I'd like to start out with the cover. The cover is not very eye catchy and the writer can make something more interesting to lure the readers. There are various cover shops on Wattpad that the writer can take help of.
The story is unique and very well thought. Everyone loved a good 1770's story. But, the paragraphs were too long and it seemed like one is reading an essay. The writer can also try shortening the length of each and every paragraph. Also, the writer can lessen the space between two paragraphs to make it look presentable
Two more things: When the writer is writing dialogues and then comes back to the story in normal form, it is adviced to leave space between them. As the readers may get confused when everything is out together.
Also, since it is suppose to be a sad and depressed story, the writer can add dark humor or sarcasm to intrigue the readers and everyone loved a good sense of humor/sarcasm.
Other than that, the choice of words is very impressive and the grammar and punctuation is on point. The story is also well imagined.
Sorry for the delay!
Hope the tips were helpful.
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