AUTHOR - @MAzhaan3005
REVIEWER - mssmystic
I am going to be completely honest with the review of this story.
Cover - I would give the cover 8 out of 10. the cover portrays the story well. It has a mysterious yet scary look.
Italics - In my opinion, I think the Author should use Italics when the character thinks of something.
Spacing - The author has some troubles with spacing. I think the author should be careful with spacing.
Paragraphs - The first paragraph was long and confusing. the paragraphs are long, some people tend to skip long paragraphs.
Full stops - the author had used this '...' a lot which tends to distract the readers.
The grammar and punctuation are good but the language could be improved. I would recommend using 'Grammarly app' while writing.
Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story. I would give it four stars out of five.
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