Unclaimed, Not Sorted [Random]

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Hey guys! I've been trying to write and come up with new material recently, and I have a new idea, only I'm not sure if it's good:// So I'm sharing it with you! Please give feedback!

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Another mark on the wall, she noted. That meant another one was gone.

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The children all around the world were disappearing, faster than ever before, perhaps. Amelie did not like that, but she didn't know what to do about it.

Why did the world have to crash just when she became guardian?

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Darkness loomed around them, threatening to overtake them at any moment, as they emerged from behind the trees in the middle of a whispered but heated argument.

"We had a deal, Marcus," the first man snarled."And you're going to keep it."

The second man, no taller than the first but was still nonetheless just as dangerous-looking, someone you definitely didn't want to cross paths with, laughed."Did we, Robbins? I don't remember."

"You told me you would keep her safe," the first man, Robbins, hissed as he kicked a stone aside.

"Safe? Safe? No thank you, Robbins. You've softened, and I don't need your help anymore."

Robbins' eyes flashed, and Marcus shivered, hoping the inner wolf of his former friend would not escape.

But it was too late.

There was a pounce, and a scream, then it all went black.

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A/N: So how was it? It's a first draft, so of course it won't be the same if I do write it out, but do you think it's a good story idea? I'm sort of stuck so please leave suggestions/feedback? Thank you!

Ooh also I just found out you can dedicate chapters to people, so if you want a dedication in a certain chapter or something please vote and comment haha :D