Harry Potter One Shots and Headcannons

Fanfic?

So I have been writing this Fanfic called What's Life Without a Little Risk?  The first year is complete and I'm staring the second year completely back up in exactly one month. It's set in the Marauders Era and the first story set is kind of sucky, but the Sixth year part is okay (3 parts of up of it) . If anyone could take some time to read just a few paragraph and tell me how you felt about it that would be nice, because it has some spelling errors and plot holes I'd like to fix them because I can't detect them all myself. Sometimes sentences you write make perfect sense to you in your head and something happens on the way down to the page were its just a bunch of hodgepodge.