Book name: Puppet show
Written by aDARKfangirl
Reviewed by TanviSowgandika
Title(Titre):
The title of the story is apt for it but I suggest you to write the full name instead of skipping the vowels and adding some special characters to the title as readers usually scroll down to other books if the title has some special character
Cover (couverture)
The cover looks beautiful it is apt for your story but do increase the font of the text and do write the author's name .
Blurb(la description)
The blurb of the story is amazing there were no grammatical mistakes and it gave the gist of the story.It makes the readers interested in it.
Storyline (scènario)
The plot of the story was amazing and made it thrilling and kept the readers kept intact to it
Grammar (grammaire)
There were no grammatical mistakes in the story.It really takes a lot to write a story with no mistakes
Characters (personnages)
The characters have played their role well in the story but you should have given the character sketch in the beginning or atleast when the character is introduced so that the readers wouldn't have any kind of confusion in their mind while reading the book so,I suggest you to write the character sketch.
Flow (Couler)
There are some breaks in the story like where is the incident taking place and all is it taking place in Delhi or Bengal apart from this everything is good like the pace of the story was neither fast nor slow.
Reviewer opinion: ( critique)
Overall, the story is amazing the main highlights were your blurb ,plot and your grammar part and do write the title with no special characters so that it attracts the readers and looking forward to read more chapters.
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