Reviewer:- NailedItSmriti
Author:- lordbyronwascool
Book Name:- कभी आना तू मेरी गली
Title(8/10) :
The title is good but very cliché. Otherwise it has good connect with the story and also depicts what the story is about.
Cover (9/10):
I love love loved it! 😍
Blurb(7/10):
I like the blurb however it was all about how 90's generation was and what era was it. You have given a sneak peek on what the story is about and I think you should've stuck to that only.
Storyline (7/10):
I like how the story turned out, a carefree and joyful girl with a calm and composed boy or vice versa is always one of the best couple pairings.I also loved how small incidents remind you of that times and all the songs used in the story were beautiful and thought too. Although there were some scenes that could have been carried out like a fan meeting her idol and there was no one to stop them, but overall everything was good.
Dialogue/Expression (7/10) :
Although in the initial chapters the dialogue were well written but I think the part where Abhilasha meets Aryan needs to be enhanced. But the last chapter was good. The dialogues and emotions were overwhelming, in a good way of course.
Creativity/Originality(7/10) :
Well to be honest I've come across plots similar to this. It's very common. But hey, that was really intriguing.
Overall Engagement (7/10):
I think the story is pretty decent in reading but lacks engagement because of the plot. It was very predictable.
Grammar(9/10):
There were no grammar mistakes but in the last chapter there is only one spelling mistake. In the second last paragraph it should be मनाते instead of मानते।
Characters (9/10):
Loved the varieties and layers of characters. Also Anirudh's personalities were very well laid out.
Flow(8/10):
The start of the story was good but in between I think the flow was a bit fast but since it was a short story,its understandable. But I would suggest that give the story it's own pace.
Overall Score:- 78/100
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